This poem stirs ones heart with its magic! Great write!....M
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
The light and warmth of love resonates powerfully through this lovely piece. The synesthesia employed in the last couplet is as effective as it is beautiful. I have had the priviledge of inhaling that glow myself and I remain intoxicated by it. I do so love the previous couplet and the image it creates:
"Bending around
The corners of my eyes"
Oh man! This is quite a fine piece of poetry and characterizes love in the way I perceive it, but I could have never proclaimed it in such perfectly gorgeous terms!
~Butch
(((((((((((((( :)) )))))))))))))))) Sweeeeeeeeeet! You are at your most authentic when the intensity of your heart and voice come through in pristine couplets that sparkle with such clarity, sincerity and grace. This could speak of the beauty of familial, agape love as well as the more personal romantic lovelight... and there does seem to be the concensus beneath me that, in some way, the Light that thus shines IS equated with the sense of well-being that comes with the giving and receiving of love. Just adore Kimmy's comment about light and love removing the skewed and veiled vision of suspicion, birthing complete vulnerability and trust; makes me think of the arc of a rainbow, with your imagery as well: the archetype symbol of partnership agreement and trust, ushering in peace and fruitfulness. Rapt beauty in this most resplendent write, Jude. Time and place forever merged into one in soulful communion. This Light-write showers everyone with its fallout! We're all glowing here! :)) TY Kate xx
It is an elixir that has no equal - love. And the heartfelt and honest expressions of such are, in my estimation, the "glue" that holds the universe together.
True love does express itself with a warm and magnificent spiritual light. This gentle and insightful write carries with it a warmth of the same kind of light. Excellent Jude!
Unusually romantic for you Jude, sounds like the love bug may be in the air down there where your muse and you reside. Lovely write indeed that brought a warm smile to my old face.
It's so wonderful to have that glow of love reflected on us. This is such a tender and very beautiful poem Jude. Perhaps even your shadow reflects joy on them too.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
And the brightest star being the Sun..How bright can that be....
"Bending around
The corners of my eyes" I love these lines...
To see out of the corner of an eye, is usually depicted as if done with suspicion, to generate the paths of a true love in colors, you bend around all those suspicions, truly the affects of its "Light Heart"
Excellent pen with a hearts light, full of inspiration!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
I know what you refer to here, Jude. There is something about the light heart that somehow lightens the load of a heavy heart. You really capture something otherwise unspoken. A great work.
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I am spellbound!
PEACE and WArmest Blessings!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
"Bending around
The corners of my eyes"
Oh man! This is quite a fine piece of poetry and characterizes love in the way I perceive it, but I could have never proclaimed it in such perfectly gorgeous terms!
~Butch
Ron
Regards
Daibhidh
love Tinka
True love does express itself with a warm and magnificent spiritual light. This gentle and insightful write carries with it a warmth of the same kind of light. Excellent Jude!
Light and Wisdom ...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Fee
Abdullahi
Michael
~hugs~
Karen
Love,
CJ
Well done.
Georg
Your poem is a pure breath of fresh air.
Be safe,
Karen
The corners of my eyes" I love these lines...
To see out of the corner of an eye, is usually depicted as if done with suspicion, to generate the paths of a true love in colors, you bend around all those suspicions, truly the affects of its "Light Heart"
Excellent pen with a hearts light, full of inspiration!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Brett
Who is able to expound to the reader such delights.
Sage
This one envelopes you in a calming embrace--exquisitely beautiful imagery/poem! Well done, my (((friend))).
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.