-a romantic and sensual write which ignites and celebrates an extreme sense of passion Excellent piece!
~Butch Howard

Down to earth essence of existence.

Ron

Excellent! A sensuous write! WOW1......m

jude!!!! you always have an incredible way of explaining the birds and the bees in exquisite metaphor. ~ sara

Wow and the fireworks continue
But this one is more enjoyable
the passion rises throughout the page!!
Love it outstanding job!!
Love and Peace to you always...Morning Star or Yolie

Yup, some don't let it rise, it just does it's own boy thing...

LOL at Kate. Priceless..But Kate down there bloody Lulworth only has the sun in the morn... but sure is pretty..

Who needs fireworks when you pen passion in beautiful lines? Love it. Well done, Jude: your best, yet!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Jude, sensual, romantic, and full of feelings. I think this is an excellent writing.

lol. I think I like your baking. Excellent and fun. Liz

Wish that I could ever be a writer as skillful as thee! Superb,excellent. I bow to your pen and voice. <Mikii>

Ahhh, Kartero.... Still baking, I see! :)) Not sure my temperature can take any more highs, but there sure is enough yeast in this poem to raise the fertility stakes so as to be able to propagate a glorious Edenic cornucopia, swelling the womb of the earth to bursting point and causing a Bang Big enough to people a brand new universe... Shouldn't be too hard for the American Dream, should it?! :)) Happy Pyrotechnics Day! (Is your Maniac still about??)

"Let it ooze, Deposit stars Within the oeuvre of heated moments"... I like when you use "stars" to represent "thoughts", perhaps. Yours are just the sort of inspired ideas that are needed to fertilise the ready soil of receptive minds.

This whole poem also strongly reminds me of Keats' "Bright Star" which he wrote for his beloved Fanny Brawne. Funnily enough, I just read up about this in my Daily Poem book yesterday. It says this: "Stars, whose fires corresponded with his own ardour (from the Latin 'ardere', 'to burn') were an endless preoccupation for Keats, and symptomatic of his sense of kinship with the transcendent world". Apparently he revised the final draft for this while his ship bound for Italy docked briefly down the road from here, at Lulworth Cove... Ain't life strange?! :)) LOL Kate xx

Excellent and beautiful Jude.

Reindeer

Hotter than a firecracker, Jude!

Jude,

Now that's what I call fireworks. A great display my friend.

This is beautiful my friend.....flowing and filled with sharp imagery......Enjoyed!

Peace,

Bill

Great writing dear man,enjoyed as always...Hugsssss

hmm, a bit off the usual route here. provocative yes. keep going and cheers

O.K. I am not sure if it is the fireworks going off over my house or this poem that has me spinning, but you have managed to incorporate the spirit of the day into a sensual offering. I hope you had a wonderful holiday, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

OH SAY...I can see, by the dawn's early light...that you have once again created the perfect multi-dimensional poetry, Jude!

Have a SKYROCKETING Indepenence Day, Brother!

And be safe. Love&Hugs, Rhonda

A powerful write penned with excellence and a unique style...bravo!
Blessings,
Happy fourth!
Joyce B.

Ooze Sadly We You Are One (Ooze) Deposit... Neat write On...

TRASK

.... And fireworks to you on the Fourth... and the 5th, and 6th, and on into next week! Words of action and activity... very well rocketed into another realm ! ! ! - Bill

Stunning write!!

Love Tinka

Very intense passion phrased as you do best...smoothly and honestly with just a hint of mother nature's magic romance spell.

Fee

The Gizz of free erotica spiritually descriptive of the explosive orgasm with the magnitude of the gunpowder keg stored up in your flesh cannon...BOOM! Re-load...Let it rise, again...

Sage

Beautiful poem ... Happy 4th ...

I welcome the big bangs..
excellent...

i can already hear ooohs and aawhs....

Great write, a cosmic romantic piece!

Thanks for this sensual write.
Hugs Angela

Very sensual and a wonderful reminder to rekindle what we already have!

An astral explosive write.

Only you could write this unique poem, with sensuality,
spirituality,and patriotism and make it sing!;-)
Beautiful work, Jude!

lovely indeed, Jude

seems a good idea to let it rise. "deposit stars" is magical. a poem with fireworks and the slow, smooth moves of passionate belief fixed upon a moment. Dawn

When one feels lonely one should fill the sky with thunder.
When the silence becomes more oppresive let it be filled with dreams.
Tha's what this poem is saying to me.
Dear reader, what it...is saying to you?
Georg

Great write, love it.

Thanks,
Dan

well done, well said

oh, I love this!

We don't do 4th July here downunder, for obvious reasons....

But you aint heard thunder till you been downunder....
Fair dinkum!!
Nice write, some layered stuff there :)
Ch'erie

Fireworks on any day <>{wonderful} - - -Ted