The whole offering is captivating and "swallows" my thinking process, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

well, jude, now you've got us all moaning!
sublime & sensual; always satisfying ;-)
peace,
carolyn

Once, a few years back, I found a word to describe your poetry, Jude. Only it escapes me for now. Suffice to say that yours is of the highest quality of expression. Very good stuff, indeed.

Anticipating every line, like the discovery of new awareness--Wow! Except the part about purging through a membrane--why am I thinking of excrement? ;-)

Ron

As always full of meaning and a poets soul.

Enjoyed very much,Hugsssss

Enjoyed this one my friend, has a sensual feeling within, nice flow that allows the mind to wonder while reading, lingers on one's thoughts! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

A beautiful passionate and sensuous poem ... hugs

YOu never disappoint.
Great one to read at the end of a day.

Elizabeth

Another great one..
Hugs Angela

"Where the remoteness of far-off planets
Is comforted by living upon one"
i really enjoyed this verse
and the overall feel of this piece

Unique expression of sensual thoughts!!
Very seductive and page filled with Expectations
Brilliant write!!
Love Peace and Joy hugsss to you always..Morning Star

as always, well done

This is quite spacial and sensual Jude. Your muse always is a delight and never fails to make this reader think and feel beyond what my own mind allows. Blessings ...
Richard

Sage is sooo right... GREAT Expectations indeed... have you read it? About Pip and Estella ("of the stars") How amazing is that!?? :)) And yes, having read Estrella's fantastic poem first, the images of her graphic are amply put into words by your surging sea-foam of a poem here, that is shot through with its radiant phallic beam. And your final Freudian image brings the whole into a totally orgiastic metaphysical exploration culminating in penetration that is as intimate as it is far-flung....

Yet, there is innocence here too: that of the anticipation of a loving virginal consummation... Again borne out, perhaps, by the frothing whites of Estrella's visual... The collective consciousness is an amazing thing! This passionate piece roars with the throb of the ocean and whispers with the dew-fall of the heavens. Pulse-racing stuff, Jude! TY Kate xx

Inspiring write.....thank you!!

Gotta love it!!

Love Tinka

We create what we anticipate, don't we Ace? This poem is like a wave cresting. Can't wait to ride it to the shore.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Seductive sensuous desire with grace of heavenly aspirations masterfully written, Jude!

Eileen

Another masterpiece of poetic expression, Jude. You are on your way to immortality with these words.

Such beautiful passion Jude.

Very soft dreamy quality that can have so much of the readers own thoughts metaphored into the meaning.

Fee

Moans the flower when it see a bee coming to take the nectar?
Has the flower expectations?

"Where starry nights inhale the faint scent of twilight" a most genial way to describe it, I opened my nostrils wide trying to capture some of it coming from your words.

Yes, pure genius.
Georg

I love the erotic veil of this poem!

Beautiful sensual writing...enjoyed reading.

There are times when the waiting seems more delicious .....Great thoughts. Victor

Basking in warm sensuality, this metaphor goes well with Estrella's posted poem tonight, "what is woman but a desperate half-soul." Great Expectation!

Sage

Sounds like maybe sex with the universe?
I can dig it.....

i enjoyed this very much-metaphoric, to me , in a sense

Nice write, Jude, enjoyed.

Thanks,
Dan

This is magnifiscent