Oh Jude, this reminds me so much of the song Elusive Butterfly by Bob Lind. We are always looking with nets of wonder for that bright elusive butterfly of love. This is a very deep, emotional poem about chasing that bright elusive butterfly of love. Thank you for sharing, Jude.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie
a probing, mystical ride, jude. love your spiritual fingerprints, poet. hope all is well at your end of the planet; miss the benefit of your presence here!
Peace,
carolyn
These are awesome hidden caves. You have penned here a lovely inspirational poem full of passion and emotions. Excellent write you have shared with us.
~hugs~
Karen
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2007
You have been missed and I am fortunely to have a few moments tonight to find such a wonderful posting. Wonderful seeing you working will illustrations again :-0
I'm a easy person to find, and I may appear standing still; it is then that a person suddenly goes into shock as they realize I am moving :-)
I always sit and read in awe your masterful works. It never disappoints me, it’s always inspirational. You are truly an endless well of artistic passion.
This expressed feelings of intricate relationship
Beautifully writhing poetic thoughts!
Glad to have you back!!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you...Morning Star
I lived in the Phillipine Islands when I was young.
I had an opportunity to explore some old WWII caves.
Once inside
I could never rest
Continued to move
Afraid of a cave-in
Or an old Jap soldier hiding around a darken corner!
Pretty sure that's not what you had in mind when you wrote this
But thought I'ld give you a chuckle.
This cave of your's goes much deeper
Sounds of a new found lover??
Doug
Enjoyed this my friend, the imagery brings is powerful bringing the write to life...while also creating a mysterious search within the readers mind...the mind is a masterful and mystery in itself...enjoyed this much, one of my favorites thus far! Unique and well written!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Image is interesting. Reminds me of a bird swimming underwater. I like the atmosphere in this Robert. Almost sounds to me like you've found a new love.
Very intriguing write Jude~ and this line had me really "searching"...it is within the past, whether of minds or history itself...I love finding...re-evaluating, conjouring...from those caves, your caves and mine...
Outstanding write, that gives beyond explanation, another meaning to the words..."search" and "hidden"
You've been missed!
Welcome back!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
What a masterful write! The mind is such a marvelous and extraoridinary thing, and yes, there are hidden caves, tributaries, and places yet to explore. We go into those tunnels--and caves-- every waking minute of our lives. (I recall at a workshop I once attended, the speaker equated the mind and learning to a filing cabinet with many drawers filled up with tons of file folders.) Your poem made me think of that.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2007
Your recent trip has revitilized you to produce a fine tuned poem. Victor
Many twists and turns through this well written journey.
Thanks,
Dan
Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2007
This glorious feast for a greedy reader's senses, this breathtaking adventure for addicts of the word... this is a delicious masterpiece. You;ve made me feel so grateful that I can read!
Word spellunking - exploring the blueprint of design...poetic engineering and the calipers/compass measure Hidden Caves so precise...architecturally stated on the bottom of the blueprint ledger...stamped with Forese signature sponsoring creative exploration...traces of aboriginal habitation...meandering content just knowing it's there...mapmaker's Saint, right up there with Vitrus Bering's contribution of 1741, Jude...
Hidden Caves that lead to a mind labyrinth where thoughts get lost and new ones are found in a demented perpetual motion that screams at you to never rest...because...it, someone, you know what, continue to move.
Metaphysical reasoning or an astral projection from the author's soul.
Whichever...excellent.
Georg
Intricate lines and hidden messages in the poem suit the title well Jude as you present us with another fine piece of written art. Well done my friend.
Welcome back,
This is tremendous, I love all the imagery and intense feelings. Thank you for this beautiful piece of Poetry.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Certainly makes me think of Indianna Jones on an archeological and sacred expedition. But the visual also makes me think gynaecology, farmer's girl that I am... and I'm sure I'm not alone in that Freudian association! With that in mind, I am thinking towards a hard labour... both of the subject of this poem and the "I" who perhaps feels himself to be very much a part of it. Deep emotional birthing seems to be involved of which spiritual clues and waymarks are sought. It is hard to seek shelter of another when they are wracked in their own labour pains and to do so would suggest an intense commitment to the shared cause. And "Reminding me to never rest As you continue to move" indicates a very active partipation in the proceedings.
Well, that's one interpretation, perhaps, of a very vivid and highly energised write. You must have been storing up masses of solar energy on your travels, so we look forward to plenty of life-giving emissions! Ozone friendly ones, but of course :)) Great to have you (almost) back, Babe. LOL Untiringly ExpeKtant Kate :)) xx
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Share
Print
Save
Follow
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie
Peace,
carolyn
Peace be with you
William
~hugs~
Karen
I'm a easy person to find, and I may appear standing still; it is then that a person suddenly goes into shock as they realize I am moving :-)
Hurry back......you are dearly missed!!
Love Tinka
Beautifully writhing poetic thoughts!
Glad to have you back!!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you...Morning Star
George
I had an opportunity to explore some old WWII caves.
Once inside
I could never rest
Continued to move
Afraid of a cave-in
Or an old Jap soldier hiding around a darken corner!
Pretty sure that's not what you had in mind when you wrote this
But thought I'ld give you a chuckle.
This cave of your's goes much deeper
Sounds of a new found lover??
Doug
Be safe,
Karen
Blessings,
Joyce B.
stay safe Robert..
Ron
Miss your inspiration dude!
Richard
Very intriguing write Jude~ and this line had me really "searching"...it is within the past, whether of minds or history itself...I love finding...re-evaluating, conjouring...from those caves, your caves and mine...
Outstanding write, that gives beyond explanation, another meaning to the words..."search" and "hidden"
You've been missed!
Welcome back!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
This is a great piece! A teaching tool to writing, I think.
Thanks,
Dan
Love,
Sage
Metaphysical reasoning or an astral projection from the author's soul.
Whichever...excellent.
Georg
Fee
ness
Loved this.
Good to see yah back
Hugs
Ch'erie
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Montauk, how sweet it is;-)
ET
This is tremendous, I love all the imagery and intense feelings. Thank you for this beautiful piece of Poetry.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Well said, Robert.
Elizabeth
Well, that's one interpretation, perhaps, of a very vivid and highly energised write. You must have been storing up masses of solar energy on your travels, so we look forward to plenty of life-giving emissions! Ozone friendly ones, but of course :)) Great to have you (almost) back, Babe. LOL Untiringly ExpeKtant Kate :)) xx