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Trilogy in M
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Mechanics


Slide in
Move in circles
Probe like a piston
Feel the engine purr



Miner


Slowly dig
Open the cave
Let fingers wander
Let the miner explore




Moment


Reach the moment
As long as possible
Repeat its momentum
Release its force

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 Reviews of "Trilogy in M"
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2007
Jude, you have turned up the heat with this subtle trilogy. You have inspired the men and made the ladies all hot and bothered! Shazam!
~Butch Howard

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 8, 2007
in all the words, passion churns!
Great being back and here with your poem just now. Thank you for your reviews Jude. I appreciate you!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 8, 2007
You are incredible....this is well done Jude!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Beautiful and unique write
I too seance sensuality here in this
Excellent piece Jude
Love Peace and hugsss to you...Morning star

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Something sensual here. I can feel it, can you?

Ron

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Your force is the enetgy that is poetry for you are the heart of its words reaching out to others.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Another unusual but strong and intriguing write Jude.

Fee

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Excellent! It's very unique.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Metaphors of eroticism. Compares a little with Chantilly Lace's poems. Suggestion is a powerful think. Well done.

Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Love this play on words. Excellent as your usual. PLB&G for caring and sharing. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
mmm...this encourages a smile

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
awesome!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Well this sure moved me!;-)...Fantastic metaphor...

ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
This is good and with each a moment in time. A slide, a dig and a reach all well put together, enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Hey Jude, good one. Great use of metaphor.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
I love the metaphor and sensual progression of this write...could go on but it looks like Kate already did :)

Edwin

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Ah... Ferrari ForEse's musical cross between The Boss's Born To Run and The Commodores Three Times A Lady! :)) Also brings sharply to mind the great Nick Cage and Catalina Jolie film about the great car boost, Gone In 60 Seconds... which, I take it, is NOT what partakers of your 3Ms would want to be the case. Sounds like it is time to re-read Moods In Motion! Dearie me, my humour will be the death of me... But this is a great bit of poetic engineering, Jude. All of your enduring aspirations and attributes are contained here: motion, exploration, momentum/verve/energy and, of course, transcendence. Seems to me, with your spot-on insights, you are ALWAYS in at least two places at once. Think this is a form of "collective chatter of consciousness" that we might all be delighted and emboldened to listen to! WTG, Kartero. suzuKi Kate xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
I love the metaphors, I have used like a miner in his cave myself. Your a bit erotic here Jude, I like that..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Jude, I agree with George, the metaphors make this an excellent read.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Good title and excellent metaphors make for a very special read.

George

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Oh the power of the mighty metaphor, Jude...
You pulled me in with your title and kept me there for quite a while...some thing are better unrushed or rehashed.
~Taylor

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
consumed by momentum's zenith; a sublime place to be!;-)
very much like this sparse form, jude.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Great writing sweet man,stay safe and well Jude...Hugss

Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Jude,

*purring* I, too, found this to be stimulating. Hmmm. Seems you're searching for treasure: and find it, too. :) Well done, my (((friend))).

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Like mounting on a old Harley, accelerate down the inclining shaft of the mine and let the momentum be consumed at the zenith.
Wery well done.
Georg

Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Jude for a mystic you certainly have a practical side! Great metaphors!

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Unique and challenging, Jude. Top-notch composition, too!
As I keep reminding the guy in my mirror - let's make up for any lack of experience... with a splash of imagination and boldness! ! ! - Bill

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
Tis this moment of all 3 found & archived -All good *Ted

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on September 5, 2007
Oh to trilogies! Great visuals Jude! So engaged, present, immediate...
A living poem to awaken the senses... Kundalini-rising potential...

Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 5, 2007
Required erotica! Ask me if I see Trilogy in M in the Rorschach Inkblot! YES! Has pastel shades of Priapus weighing his penis in a fresco from Popeii...daytime, midnight, during a thunderstorm, during an eclipse, under a rainbow - a trilogy of erotic energy through creative metaphor - evocative of the 5 Ms of Tantric practice ritual (sex) Maithuna, madya (wine), matsya (fish), mamsa (meat), mudra (parched grain) - the need to experience the highest possible ecstasy via the lowest possible means...

Sage

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 5, 2007
I enjoyed the common bond of finding the right spot or goal, be it mechanicl, physical or mental. Enjoyed


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