is there any better kiss? after reading this I am not to sure
very smooth....are the lips lavender oh I better not go there just know that this took me to heights and in some guttered filled places as well (smile)
love pieces like this where you leave it up to me to go where i want to go with it
Skulls. Skulls? Hmmm, skulls!/?
Hmmmm? Perhaps a temptress in a lace thong and an alien warlord doing "experiments" on each other?
Your imagination is ...Hmmm? Leaves me speechless, as all your work tends to do...and makes us all think way out there, just to see where your writing might take us.
Love the combined energies of both the huntress and the hunter in this, Jude. Elegant and supple romance, straight out of the annals of the classic historic novel. Jane Austen would be proud: she loved the power-plays between equally matched males and females, both in terms of their intellects/sensibilities and sensualities. Ahh, the thrill of the chase culminating in a satisfying romp! :)) And it can be the intuited and cerebral connections that create the most stimulating environment of sexual heat. I like the female, surging drive to this one which apparently ends in a good, old-fashioned missionary posture in the end: another classic touch. But all is finely balanced and in-tune between two who know each other's moves so very well and premeditate them. Delightfully playful in its yieldedness. I like the complicity of the elements here, too. Fabulous spirited and wholly spontaneous and unforced love au natural, like wot it should be.
... And I nearly wrote a poem a couple days' ago about The Hunter in response to hearing that my all-time favourite male singing voice, Paul Rodgers (Free and Bad Company) has just wed his long-time partner who is a former Miss Canada... and, following Sage's line of thoughts, perhaps also a Victoria's Secret Angel?!
Your other reviews see's or feels a romantic prelude in this piece,
I see & feel resuscitation for the breath of life to be exchanged.
There is depths to your words that can express.
May You Be Embraced With Love & Laughter To Know The Purity Of Joy!
Vickie
Exceptionally beautiful and delicate
Creative choice of words which
Provide with nice imagery
And stunning Passion!!
Enjoyed reading this romantic view of your thoughts
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Watching the beat of heat
Settle upon the molten fiber of adjacent skulls <--- in england we put it a more eloquent way.... The beat of the meat and the angle of the dangle...lol
I think some of the lasses have just fainted.....
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Waiting, tasting, watching, listening, positioning ... not a moment too soon or too late ... perfect timing!
Images of a couple moving closer towards each other in slow motion...."undulating a kiss on lace and lavender lips." Very engaging and intrigueing. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria
You capture the excitement and anticipation of the moment, Jude and you do it in a most "softly erotic" way. Each line has an underlying hum that vibrates into the next. Damn, I nearly wanted to kiss her myself!!
Take care,
Sherry
Oh Jude,
This is very sensual. I love the last stanza,
Positioning Himself accordingly
Undulating a kiss on lace and lavender lips
Now, how did you ever know I love the sent of lavender and lace is my favorite choice!
You have penned a very beautiful poem here thank you for sharing!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V'
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Ron
very smooth....are the lips lavender oh I better not go there just know that this took me to heights and in some guttered filled places as well (smile)
love pieces like this where you leave it up to me to go where i want to go with it
xo Taylor
Hmmmm? Perhaps a temptress in a lace thong and an alien warlord doing "experiments" on each other?
Your imagination is ...Hmmm? Leaves me speechless, as all your work tends to do...and makes us all think way out there, just to see where your writing might take us.
blessin's
cynth'ya
... And I nearly wrote a poem a couple days' ago about The Hunter in response to hearing that my all-time favourite male singing voice, Paul Rodgers (Free and Bad Company) has just wed his long-time partner who is a former Miss Canada... and, following Sage's line of thoughts, perhaps also a Victoria's Secret Angel?!
I see & feel resuscitation for the breath of life to be exchanged.
There is depths to your words that can express.
May You Be Embraced With Love & Laughter To Know The Purity Of Joy!
Vickie
Be safe,
Karen
Sage
Creative choice of words which
Provide with nice imagery
And stunning Passion!!
Enjoyed reading this romantic view of your thoughts
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star
Settle upon the molten fiber of adjacent skulls <--- in england we put it a more eloquent way.... The beat of the meat and the angle of the dangle...lol
I think some of the lasses have just fainted.....
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
expert passionate moves of the master...
wind howling,
stan
Inspiring and romantic write.
And she will be in my arms forever...
Georg
good right
john+
Nice to read you stuff...
Kathy
Take care,
Sherry
Susan
This is very sensual. I love the last stanza,
Positioning Himself accordingly
Undulating a kiss on lace and lavender lips
Now, how did you ever know I love the sent of lavender and lace is my favorite choice!
You have penned a very beautiful poem here thank you for sharing!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V'