Contrasts and complementary feelings and realities.
You have a very interesting way of introducing the last three lines.
Intriguing.

Axilea

Enveloping, like surround sound.

Ron

a montage of mystery and magic, Jude.

... Makes me hold my breath with the suspense of it all. Totally electrifying in its intensity. Another thriller of a write. Like blood pounding in the temples and the roar of silence that is a waterfall in the brain... eddying out into the quiet calm of the pool at the end, the blissful cocoon of sheltered thoughts, the stillpoint at the epicentre of emotional tension - like the image which your lines 7 and 8 conjure, that of the wings of a butterfly opening up from hibernation.

My cinematic mind especially loves lines 9, 10. Makes me think of screenplays where the two main protagonists are moving entirely in different circles, yet inextricably linked and drawn by the centre-stage theatre of life playing out their lives. They only meet and recognise their mutual "otherness" at the end, when they return to the empty platform for the final unveiling which brings their story's resolution. Then the curtain drops et voila! Contented sighs all round... :))

an embracing and comforting sensation

Jude,
I am sensing you as I write this review..I know how you feel, You have written a mysterious love poem, but to me I know what you are saying here, I can definitely feel your inner spirit.
Much Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

There is a mysterious quality to this beautiful poem, Jude, just as there is in the most successful and intriguing relationships of the heart. The world becomes a misty fog and the only light in the universe shines upon just those two. This is the epitome of all desires and the most elusive of all realities.
Take care,
Sherry

So very soothing and a great comfort to the aching soul....

Be safe,
Karen

Very beautifully expressed and written poetic view of thoughts
The beautiful sense of feeling surrounded
By love!!
As always your poetic thoughts are very unique!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star

a sensory perception labyrinth

Hello mega....

Love surrounding you - immeasurable and yet stated so beautifully and tenderly.

Kathy

A wonderful poem, Jude...of that special peace two souls find when in love...

~Carole

Jude, this is very impressive. poetic intercourse with the other's thoughts. like 'distance filling the curvature of spirits'. nice, enjoyed.

Desire, oneness, and that sense of being surrounded or in a wonderful bubble of ecstasy with the one you love is sweetness indescribable. Nice poem.

Another wonderful work, Jude. This is romance at its best.

Jude this is one of your very best, surrounded and at peace. How lovely this poem is.

Love in three acts, a romantic theater to fill one afternoon with the wonders of a lover's whispering.
Georg

Jude,

Love seems so catchy this morning. An exquisite write portraying the value of this love to you. Blessings Always, Paul.

Such a mysterious yet sensually flowing write that blends the best of mysterious thoughs to the deepest romantic feelings...sweet.

Fee

What a beautiful way to feel love and be at peace as if one heart beats for two.

lovely write and sentiments

Beautifully penned, Jude; I am surrounded by loveliness in verse.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Uh hmmmmm...love it!
BTW Patrick is back performing at Kenny's Castaways Wed. night at nine...free...will be there weekly on Wed. (different times)
HUGS and PEACE!

There is nothing like the silence of two hearts in unison and being surrounded by that special someones thoughts this scenario is to die for...beautifully said Jude...

ET

I had the feeling of being in an empty theatre as I read this...filled with a calmness of being in love. Your writes always evoke such a visual and emotional sense...Enjoyed

Edwin

Peace beyond the duality within a Triad relationship......
Beautiful!
:-D

Oh well done Jude!! Very well done! I can feel this.
Love,
annie

This is the epitome of thanks for a passion so deep it give's it's all.
Complete!
Susan