Inside Falling Out (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 8, 2007

This one turned me inside out.

Ron

Reviewed on November 7, 2007

Alone except for the blood red moon
And the constant flurry of pure white snow

I particularly love these verses but the whole poem reflects your style. Powerful and compelling expression, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

I don't think anyone can touch the depth that you seem to go.....everyline opens metaphores thick and seething out like flowers under the sun not melting but just enuf intensity too lift and let the fragrance loose

glorious really

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on November 2, 2007

"Inside Falling Out" is a perfect title for this masterful write...and you express it with such vengeance!
And of course, there is no one around to share...I know the feeling!
As always, Jude~ you inspire me, touching light where no light has ever touched, forcing change in my environment...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

Richard is plumb, the best thing grow over time, like two plants planted next to eachother, become the strongest bond...

How are you btw. Missed yer..

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

Sometimes when we've wanted something really bad for a long time - perhaps like true love with another - there's a tendency to smother the possibilities that are given us because we don't allow the plant to grow and blossom in its own time.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

Those last two lines are so enlightening.
Fire & Ice to clear the passions only to
be burned.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

A Well Penned excellent write
thank you Jude for sharing your thoughts
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Gypsy Soul (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2007

Hey Jude,
Right on Brotha.
La Loba Live'z...

Love'n'Light
Gypsy.xxx

Blessed Be ! ! !

Reviewed by Saberi Roy

Reviewed on October 31, 2007

very well written poem. last line is especially brilliant.

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on October 31, 2007

Thanks to the thread which never rips we are comforted every time we think we are left alone. However, it takes faith to feel it.
Bravo, keep going, Emile

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on October 31, 2007

Such beauty shines within solitude.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 31, 2007

You always soar among the stars, no wondre they like you so much!;-)
sublime poem!
ET

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

There is a fine line between arriving and going over the top, at least as far as other people's perception of us is concerned. When we strive to go higher than the accepted highest, it becomes difficult for others to relate to us and to a degree for us to relate to the masses. Enlightenment can become a very lonely journey as we implode in an effort to fuse with the universe. Great visuals, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Man alive, you can write about stuff some of the rest of us can hardly think about, Jude. Now I am positively going to have to read every single thing I've missed of yours during my little haitus. Absolutely adore the last couple of lines. Dawn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Jude,

Your words are the depth of our very being. You find words to say when we feel but have no words. Enigmatic.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

This is so very deep, like something from inside of you just had to come out. You leave me in awe.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

your writes are intense...thoughts with feelings...i enjoy them very much, thanks,

Debby

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

If you get to close to the fire, it will burn you. Perhaps, it is better to be alone than to get burned.

Kathy

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Feelings intricately woven into words. Thoughtful and mystical.

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Feelings, images, WOW! This is great!
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

I like the feels of this one :-)

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Jude,
Another mystical wonder. I love all the imagery in this poem, mostly feelings of loneliness and yearning, but also beauty within this loneliness. Very nicely written...
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Jude, powerful write, well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Beautiful! --Charlie

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Another spectacular effort, Jude.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

My gosh, these words burn in my brain,, very moving,,

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Cataleptic. . . .
Bursting. . .
VERY well written - Fantastic.
DWB

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

I like the way you weave your words into a work that makes so much sense

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

You really get to the core of meaning here...I love your work. HUGS

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

on the burning field of reflection, the words of a lost mind in the middle of a million crossroads with a backpack full of burning dreams.
Mystical one.
Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

So many intense strong lines and deep reflections in this write that the images rush into the mind in a slide show of intensity. Very well done Jude.

Fee

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

I like this

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

an intense and deep write here Jude. many themes can be read between your lines. enjoyed this very much

randy

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 30, 2007

Jude,

I really believe that timing is everything. You've penned a keeper here. Blessing Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on October 29, 2007

Spirit thawing inside the radiant fallout of stars unseen

What a masterpiece poem you penned here, Jude. I always admire the depth of your thoughts