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Righteous Rejection
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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Just because I refused to imagine you as a saint

You took it to heart and ascended
Back to the heaven you felt most comfortable in

Yet, declined to rise in style and grace
Leaving me without a prayer

Still, I felt exonerated
And never relinquished my faith in you
 

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 Reviews of "Righteous Rejection"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on January 2, 2008
interesting read well done

Reviewed by deleted deleted (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
Awesome!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Short, but, oh, so sweet.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
... to keep faith in the righteous vision and perspective you have of a person is fully exonerating and maintains the stability of any relationship when the other is intent on inhabiting only their self-woven cocoon of delusions. Saintly behaviour indeed! Whether our pedestals are self-erected or imposed on us by others, they can be a total pain in de arse and a good friend is one who helps us dismantle them and who suffers with us the potential damage of their falling timber. My, I'm feeling so Stevie Nicks today... perhaps I'll repost San Mistico... !! :)) xx

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Very powerful

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Flying free is love for me. I can't see real love not being free.

Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Sometimes we need to pay devotion to our angels or their wings have a tendency to ride the currents on an updraft of dispair whether real or imagined.

Fee

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
interesting and thought provoking write. Lady J

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Exonerated is the key here. To be freed from what grates against the soul is always the better choice; even if it hurts for awhile.
Stand strong!
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
Most powerful Jude!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
There seems to be a lot said within your words here Jude. You took it to heart and asended back to the heaven you felt most comfortable in. A lot said here, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
I suppose the term saint should be saved for those who have lived larger than life or at least devoted their life to the betterment of others at the expense of themselves. Being a "good person" in life does not bestow upon us sainthood, even in our death. For someone to have faith in us, despite our humanly flaws, is a blessing far greater than being placed upon a pedesteal from which we would surely fall from grace. You pack a powerful punch in so few words here, Jude, yet there is a sense of turmoil as you try to find the balance between the physical and the spiritual. Excellent penning.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Beautifully and heartwarmingly stated....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
The components of life and the immensity of the sky. Demystifying a saint makes us the lone survivor. Righteous Rejection is in alignment with invocation and forgiveness, focusing mind and stilling the spirit. Yours is still a world of sacred honor, Jude...vows, oaths, and offerings...

Love Always,
Sage

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Faith and spirituality are multifaceted concepts. Their abstraction makes us turn to more tangible realities that will take us on a journey.
The result may be a revelation or a fatal illusion.
The layers of interpretation here, take us from the earthly to the divine... with an edge.

Axilea

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
You have something here. Nowadays, more peeps are realising about the infinite rather than the man made caged.

As anessa says, some see just the finger, and not the moon that it's pointing towards...

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
and there lies the juxtaposition, the irony of it all; such a difference between the religious and the spiritual [like pharisees and saducees]
a true faith sees beyond....as your eyes most assuredly do
ness

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Wow!!!!! Jude, this is AWESOME!!!!!

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Very interesting, thought provoking lines. You may want to change imagine for consider. 'without a prayer' is really good as well as 'never relinquished my faith...'. This is one of the best. Cheers

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Aw com on! I just wanted you to think I was a God ;-) I do enjoy reading your words :-)

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
So little says so much.

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
"Omy very moving..I prayed you find the
The peace you looking for!
As always Brilliant and powerful!!
Wishing you Peace Love and Joy.....Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
wow-a very poignant write-so well written

Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Powerfully penned, Jude...sad, in a way. I pray you find the peace you seek.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Very powerful poem, Jude on this stormy Sunday morning. I hope that things go a bit better for you this coming week...Much peace, love, and light, to you,

Amber "V"


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