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betrayal's affect (haiku)
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two faces rolled up
into one causeless effect
leaves me split apart

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 Reviews of "betrayal's affect (haiku)"
Reviewed by Gerald Zollar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2008
Haiku demands multiple reads, then it hits. Like it.

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Reviewed on January 8, 2008
Robert, you look great in your new picture. Thanks for looking and commenting on my art you babe. (HUGS)

Reviewed on January 7, 2008
Two faces are soon exposed. Powerful write Jude.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
Wow, what a powerful statement you've made with just 12 words, Ace!
Sometimes, less is more.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 6, 2008
The more two-faced we become, the more our affect is neutralised and annihilated and we also fracture on the inside. A wonderfully observed double entendre, noting that betrayal can be from both without and within. The old adversarial tactic of "divide and rule" is a successful psychological device on both the individual and collective levels. On the other hand, the ability to shape-shift often just comes in handy! Betrayal is painful at the best of times, and especially so if it is without cause and totally unfounded. Effective writing here. xx

Reviewed on January 5, 2008
I've known this feeling..it hurts, but... life does get better..and in my case..better than ever! Hang in there Jude.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Lol at Turner...superbly powerful Ku Jude. A very Happy New Year to you sir.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Enigmatic. Unless you're a pair of curtains and pull yourself together..

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
acknowledged dna_evol_Ted

Reviewed by Sheri Uy
Reviewed on January 5, 2008
Great 'ku. Deep and thought provoking. Well done!

Be well,
Sheri

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Wow so much sad in a few words
a split personality
I agree with Karen its a difficult decision
Brilliant and a Powerful haiku!
Peace Love and Hugsss to you....Morning Star

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Wow! This is right on the money. Thank you. Carin

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Ouch sometimes difficult to decide which is the right decision or direction....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
...the laws of cause and effect...held deep in my self for years...have many times changed this face of mine...sometimes split apart...that I might see the other side of myself.
you have penned strong vibrant words...
John

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
most powerful offering in just a few words!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Me too!
Powerfully done!

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Phew- strong Ku, strong one voice comes through - Excellent Hoooman Nature Ku Jude - Nicky xx

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
hand rolled cigar,wispy smoke hanging in the air,thick cloud of heavy smoke,
so I guess my thought process is a little skewed,
stan

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
This Haiku is so subjective that it hints of mystery as to your motivation. For me, it is the ying and the yang, ever present in all situations. Excellent!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Quite a powerful, 'Ku.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Jude, so much in just a few words..No one is worth our life being torn apart. Here's a Naruda quote:

“A child who does not play is not a child, but the man who doesn't play has lost forever the child who lived in him and who he will miss terribly.”

I say go out and play!!!!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Wow! Split idenities but, yet....a whole.

Outstanding.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Captivating my friend...I think we all have a side of ourself that we do not allow others to see...excellent write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Intriquing Ku, I look back through this one and see myself many years ago in my youth torn between my child and the woman I loved...hard decisions weigth in those few words I think my friend.

Fee

Reviewed on January 4, 2008
So much said in seventeen perfect syllables...excellent, Jude.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
...perhaps two faces of Eva?
Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
Jude,

This reminded me of the song, "Two Faces Have I" I can see the tears among the laughter. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
a very powerful little write!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Great 5-7-5
Somehow it reminds me of a fruit roll........?????????
Good work!
Becca~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Excellent weatherless ku;-)kidding aside a brilliant ku


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