beyond is a window (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ahmad Abang (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2008

A philosophical approach towards living this life. Strong and mature. Thanks for the good work. It's a real enjoyment.

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

Excellent-library, here it comes.

Reviewed on June 7, 2008

sounds like a very reasonable approach
a dream-fired brain abides
first stanza resonates beautifully, jude
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

This is silica based poetry, (limestone poet) an ingredient in glass-blowing...to heat a mixture of sand and lime...to blow it all away and mold it into a vessel, transcending dreams into bottles much more containable than humans...beyond is a window, indeed Jude...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

grinning at the rhyme scheme...wishing you pleasant dreams

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Mysterious and interesting view
Beyond is a window looking past the pain?
Dreams will
Overwhelm the brain with images
This one is very intriguing and it holds a mysterious
Message within
Brilliant words of wisdom
Outstanding poetic thoughts
Peace Love and Light�and hugessss too�.Morning Star

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

I'm thinking the other.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

A nice vision ... the crown of growing flames sounds Christ-like

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Succinctly powerful in expression; thank you, Jude. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

This is quite refreshing from you. I love the metaphors, rhyming, and your message.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Selene Skye

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Captivating with every single word!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

stunning...simplicity painted with insight

Fee

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

There are many windows in life and you've put words to a special window in your awareness--beyond the pain. Interesting write.

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Mysterious idea of "beyond"...
Some intriguing and powerful imagery,
I love those "broken syllables and transparent names".

Axilea

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

OK! Interesting introspection here.

Keep Rhyming I like it..:) Ch'erie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Well Jude, I see you were visiting Jersey Ed's dwellings...that smoke can twist any brin into a pretzel...but please, don't lean too far out of that window and get a bump in your head and...write more?

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Sometimes it takes a look ahead...into that window of the future...to get past that pain. Inspirational writing.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

...to sleep per chance to dream...curtained eyelids shutting...to heal.
inspiring work Jude...
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Gazing, as though reaching out to the heavens for answers sought to sooth your soul and ease your pain. I hope you are okay....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

So haunting makes me want to drift your way, walk up to your dirty window, take my t-shirt and with a circle wipe a corner, peak in past the faded curtains and impart a mischevious smile.....Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Hey Jude ... An awesome write and I too enjoyed the rhyming ;) hugs

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

love your rhyme;-) this showed me a good way to get past my pain...ET

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

What's this stuff with rhyming, or are you cutting in on my territory, bro'? Oh what the hell, ya gotta do things differently every now and again...keep cool this up coming weekend etc...Ed (maybe a swim out at Coney Island, before or after a Nathans delicious dog)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

wonderfully written

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Rare for you, Jude, rhyming lines - but beautifully inspiring - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Great way to look at it
Stay safe
Ron

Reviewed by deleted deleted (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

You never disappoint, Jude.