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purify
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an ensemble of forty believers
were baptized in shallow depths of Orchard Beach

ninety degrees: ties, striped shirts, dungaree skirts,
hallelujahs echo across the sound

ski jets make small waves
as the sun hides
behind a hazy stream of clouds

the lord watches
though I doubt he really cares

nor do Chinese girls eating ice cream
or macho men staring down
‘lil asses strolling across the shore

I wonder are the sins of the world
are ever really cleansed?

or are we all just trying to purify our hallucinations?

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Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 26, 2008
We each live in a world, within a world, within a world. Each one spinning around the other in oblivian except for those brief moments when they happen to brush against one another. We tend to focus so intently upon that which has a direct affect upon our own life and/or belief that we fail to notice, or care really, about the rest. Interesting observations, Jude and simply excellent poetry.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 20, 2008
The good people of the church have always gone into the den of inequity to purify, signifying nothing. Wise observation of the state of religion.

Ron

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Interesting thoughts penned here Jude, and though you know how I feel about whether the almighty cares or not, there have been times when I've yelled out the question. He cares, you can count on it.
Good to read you again
:) Ch'erie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
One of the things I like about your poetry...you have a lot to say...and have a style all your own in which to say it!

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
It's interesting how you paint your canvas first and then ask your questions. It is so sudden, it comes as a surprise and really makes one think.

Axilea

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 17, 2008
methinks he cares,and yes to both questions
i enjoyed this change of pace,sweetman...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 17, 2008
I have seen scenes such as this before and I do believe it is to justify what it is they believe for the moment, well said as always...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
i was on beaches in NY and NJ reading this and i got the feeling that i met these same people before as they scatter themselves everywhere across countless beaches-the baptizing image is fantastic.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
This so strikes a chord in my mind with your "another day" poem, for some reason... Here, just another day of each of us doing our thing, acutely observed by a spiritually watchful mind. Some of us are busy looking up to connect with the unseen; some of us look at what's manifestly around us to invest us with those warm, fuzzy feelings and to blot out the grot. To each of us it is some kind of salvation, a way of being freed from whatever shackles us, and God knows we need it - and cares, I believe. But the Divine meets with us where we're at, uniquely and individually, whether upright or prostrate; laid out or laid back! It's a relationship thing; our personal response is our choice. But "yes" to both questions - and continuously, for all time. Funnily enough, my daughter got a friend to baptize her off a windswept beach in Wales on Saturday afternoon... just a few seagulls present, I imagine, but reckon the Lord will have been standing by with a warm towel! :))

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Water cleanses negative energy, I love your poem Jude.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Jude you are never afraid to share controversial thoughts and for that I respect you and your poetry.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
well if we really are just hollographic illusions, then I guess... none of it ever matters, our minds just think it does ;)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Your thoughts are always unique, and you always give us another way to view life...splendid Jude

Carole~

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Interesting thought. I like the Chinese girls and macho guys. Cheers

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
God gave us everything pure, how in the heck we need to purify anything if we only had to follow that short instructions book Moses came down with?

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
A very good question, my friend.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
I like this one, honest and true look at your thoughts on the subject matter (which is one I agree with) and leaving lots of room for thought inbetween the crisps images.

Fee

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Jude,
Yes, I firmly believe when a person is baptized his sins are all washed away by the blood of Jesus. From the moment he/she is saved his sins are forgiven.

Many blessings to you,
~Linda

Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Jude,

Thought provoking question at the end: never know, unless you ask. =] Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Good question at the end. Good write, Robert!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
poignant words-i enjoyed it

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Thank you for sharing again Jude and I agree with Regis, each time we read this we can get something different out of it. Great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Yes, and can you believe it, i understood it for a change...My brain works sometimes...Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
well said

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
I read and read and read this and it means more each time. Thank you, Jude. I hope you are well and happy. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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