Teasing can be pleasing, heating up passion to new heights! Love it!

:-) She only teases because you like it.

Enjoyed the poem, Jude.

Jude This is so sensually exotic & delishiously provocative in every carressive line!!
Love Your New Bio Pic Too...
Peace, Love & Poetry
Vickie

You know me sooooo well, Jude...Oh!...this isn't about me??? Well, just the same, it is playful, passionate and perceptive. Loved it!
Take care,
Sherry

now why am i giggling like a schoolmate over a game of hide-and-seek?
perfectly penned, utterly delightful read, jude.
be well, master poet!
cg

"the fragrance of mystery, cryptically sweet and passionately undressed"... Oh yes! :)) Glorious confection of a write, a Pavlova lightly whipped and bringing to mind (for all us hitherto ballerina wannabes!) images of pink leotards, shin-length layers of chiffon and life en pointes! I always wanted to dance in the story of Giselle, which paradoxically this reminds me of, somehow. Yet, that wee word “just” troubles me a little: from your luscious, full-bodied, character-filled descriptions, it seems to me that this particular leading lady is more than “just” anything, Senor. It makes me write an NB to self that these “innocent” little four-letter words – just, love, hate, real, lies – always punch so much more than their own weight and need to be used pretty carefully…



Anyways, a beautiful moon-tribute sonnet, perhaps, and a hark back to your very old poem, Fertile Surface, I think. And more recently, the Pitt/Jolie cat-and-mouse of Silly Poet. Glad someone is keeping you on your toes, Kartero! And, as an aside, I think you’d look pretty darn good in tights… as long as Sage’s review didn’t apply at the time… :)) Korpsdeballet Kate xx

ah, but isn't it a nice surprise? ;) Beautiful poem, Jude ...

I think this might be a bit over my head. I read it twice and may have to just reflect upon it. Worth reading again and again though.
Blessings J'nia

Absolutely gorgeous Jude.

my kind of poem Jude -- it elicits concentration from the reader and allows for a myriad of interpretations -- I prefer the inferences to great passion -- this is indeed, a "Tease" -- may great joy sweep you along the path to love and peace -- JMW

Who told you about my muse. Illusions are hard to hide from your discerning eye. I bow to your amazing pen as always. Mikii

The lady of the night that satisfies all your desires and then vanishes like a puff of smoke.

Most of your poems fit this description and makes the ladies squirm while I just scratch my head. ;-)

Ron

Darned she was just here, you are right she's just a big tease, all in the mind dear Watson ha, Bless ya Jude! Jasmin Horst

I like the way you describe annd paint a picture of your subject, in your words she becomes all things...a tramp, a ghost, a lady, a witch. We pick the personna from the list you supply. Nice.

Fee

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Jude...perfection in your lines...from the sensuality contained within, right down to the way you've seductively formatted "tease." I especially like those last four lines.

I love a poem that has many meanings and your writes are never wrong as you share with us passion and mystery among your words Jude. I often feel we get more out of your words then you put in. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Gimme anytime a translucent, unabated and sweet tease that goes passionately undressed, it is very lonely down in the emotional dungeons.

Georg

Lovely poem

I get a sort of love/hate relationship mixed in with longing and desire for something that the writer doesn't want a part of but is intrigued enough into caring about such things,
You simply amaze me everytime I read one of your poems..I feel the depth and passion in how you write.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Jude, this is timeless and provacative. Your intimacy with literary elements is magical. Your words reflect the irony of man and nature, two juxaposing personas competing for what each desires but can not quite touch but lives within the soul of one. The images you string line-by-line depicts the sultry-suductive voices hiding within her, within it. What a 'ghost' of a teaser this is! Kudos!

visually enjoyed the clever curvey format, and the poem tends to tease the teaser, "cryptically sweet"

Jude,

Very passionate poem. Your words speak so eloquently of an angry lover.

Mary

Sweet writing as one explores the many levels of passion....

Be always safe,
Karen

The poem itself is more a tease than your, "cryptically
sweet and passionately undressed" nymph;-)gotta love it!...ETease;-)

Erotic divination with a sentimental gusher erect with hard voyeurism:) Gossamerry~

Sage

Very interesting and very well-crafted. Gives me pause for thought.

I think this can be interpreted or "adopted" by the reader on a number of levels and meanings. Thank you, Jude. Love and peace to you,

Regis

They cannot help being a tease,
But for them there are varying degree's...e