petty ( 5-7-5) (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 16, 2009

Much said with a few words Jude!....M

Reviewed on June 15, 2009

Some people are just plain clueless and unenlightened!

Luckily, you are not one of those people, love ya Jude, you are a man that can say so much with less words.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 15, 2009

This speaks volumes!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 15, 2009

Hi Jude, petty indeed, have experienced these myself... so much in so few words, as always, Jude....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

well said!

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Big ego with low self-esteem....and how we treat others. That's my take. Thanks for getting me to think this day. Always a rare and precious thing that is!

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Lack of courtesy is a product of self-absorption. Must take it with the proverbial "grain"(it still bites). Fine Ku, Jude...

Lin

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

This gets you thinking. Good

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Jude,
Pain, frustration, bad manners, even the breaking of hearts and relationships.
John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

All it takes is a little pettiness to hurt. Camus wrote about
a man who, when snubbed on the street by a friend, went home
and shot himself. -gene.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Your concluding line really brings this home. Such a shame that some must treat others with such disrespect. Powerful Senryu. ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

epitaph on the tombstone...what a way to go out of this life, to be known in this way...sad

Sage

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Whether a full poet, free write, ode or this great poem your origianality and talent never ceases to amaze me.

Fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

So many times I've been petty,
Wish I could take them back,
cause when I think about them I still get sweaty...

you've said so much with so little, here Bob...take care, ED

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Expressed PERFECTLY!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

creative expression is in the eyes of both the reader and artist...they don't always see eye to eye...send it blessings and let it go....

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Fantastic Ku, Jude! Wish I had your adroitness,I think we all could use this one....ET

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Plagued by bad manners,
one can only imagine
suitable karma.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Don't you just hate people like that??? You aimed right between the eyes with this one, Jude...Take no prisoners!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

I love haiku. This one expresses a lot in a most succinct and effective fashion. Thank you, Jude. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

WOW, Jude - packs a powerful punch! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Oh disdain!...how many have regret it, because it can't takes back.

Georg

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Ooo! It would seem someone has pinched a nerve. A bad review perhaps? I love this, it has the main quality I like, poetic smart ass-ness (my word) Love it!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

I agree with George here...there are those that have mastered it all, well done.
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 14, 2009

Some people are masters at it.