I think this is dedicated for somebody here at Authorsden. I think someone likes you it starts with an A.
Cheers
Alain

Magnetic, It draws the reader into the ambiance of created visuals ....M

Oooo what a darling little pomegranite of a poem this is... fig-like too, flowering from the inside out; starting within the core and moving outwards. This takes me immediately to your two delicious Inside You poems of years' ago... but the tone here is pure Potent Sleep (which floored me when I looked it up and read my comment on it, given wot I just wrote you about...). I have absolutely no idea why I have recall over your work better than my own, but, from my canon, it made me think of Dangerous Sharp. All in all, a fabulously fruity little cornucopia served up in Granny Smith's best bone china, the way I like it! Mwah! :)) xx ... and LOL Ron's comment: no peeling skin this year, but have had trouble with scar tissue over the past three days, no joke!

Gives me the creepies... a bad sunburn?

Ron

Excellent, Jude!
Sheila

fascinating work

OMG...!!!

I like how this 'peels' the insulation off the synapses

Your first three lines are absolutely magnetic - they pulled me right into the screen. I love the alchemy; the metaphysics; the intimacy taken to spiritual heights.

one of your best..the easy flow but yet deep thoughts that run through the neurotransmitters like pulses of lighting...well done
fee

Quite thought provoking, my friend.

A microscopical love sure is bigger than no love at all.
Clever way to tell her/him not to start peeling margaritas yet.

Georg

Jude, this is so deep and has such an intimate feel to it.

interesting alchelmy :)

Jude, you left me puzzled, I am not familiar with the idea of bending molecules..., but I sense a profound thought and secret desire to unite...
Love, ankin

I love the depth of the "embrace the disguise" idea.

Lubricious shapeshifting melting away the dross to get to the seminal fluid pouring into the crucible! How do you contain yourself! Wet dream of upcoming reality out of costume and into bare skin! Alchemically Inspired!

Love,
Sage

Sexually profound and exciting, Robert! In its subdued narrative manner, I mean. To be peeled away from self feels acutely needful, in age, art and human emotionality.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

a sapient stalk flows through the inside story that centers itself eccentrically within each subatomic particular phrase

,,,very interesting indeed..to get to the core..great write
Christine

"Pure intermolecular energy relaxation of the OH bending vibration of water molecules dissolved in organic liquids"

Jude, You can bend my molecules anytime! lol

I just love how you say so much with so little...

I love your opening, "When I dream, I dream thoughts inside of you"

very stimulating and and makes me think of the saying "Sees right through you"...

Very deeply moving for me tonight. Nicely written and expressively taken.

Peace, love, and light,

Amber "V"

mentally surgical probe, Jude...

John

How adventures, could end in an explotion me thinks, I mean, well you know, Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Thought-inciting and quite mesmerizing in theme expressed, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Excellent. My Myspace site has numerous instances of showing the masks that we wear, but unmasking the molecules, now that is a horse of a different color, Jude.

Profound yet somewhat eerie. There is fodder for an amazing Halloween poem or story in these thoughts. Fantastic, Jude!
Take care,
Sherry