If I dream aloud someone will come to put with a pillow on my face!!! LOL
Georg
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2009
If dreaming is aloud, they'll stop at nothing next... and will there be weight loss clinics for the poor sun and moon? But perhaps most perplexing is the paradox of those two opposing camps finally getting together and raising a grin... are they frothy grins? To what are they toasting? the grin reaper who has finally curtailed the battle royal of dualism Time has waged for so long... so long... the sound is like a bell... that tolls me from thee to my sole self.... Adieu
I liked the way this one made my mind flash on impressions of someone somehow actually dreaming aloud and in so doing felt a little bit happier because of it...nice one Jude.
... and if you dream in silence, the clouds read your thoughts and paint their pictures throughout the heavens, raising eyebrows from east to west (or from ear to ear??!) :)) xx
Is it the vibrations in our minds that exagerate the globes? Whatever, it works...as does your de-lightful KU, Jude! Imagery...
Blessings and Love - Micke
This is wonderful, Jude. As I read the last line, I realized that the variant of rays in the place of raise would still make (nearly)
perfect sense.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2009
Ab-so-lutely . . . and . . .
if you dream aloud
and shun all the naysayers
eureka awaits
WHISPERS OF THE HEART is artist and author J. Allen Wilson's second book of poetry.It can be autographed and shipped within 48 hours of order. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
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carolyn
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph
Sheila
Ron
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
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John
I like the enigma wrapped up in words
Unquestionably a gem!
r
Carole~
Blessings and Love - Micke
Marcia
Love & Love,
Sage
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
perfect sense.
Take care,
Sherry
if you dream aloud
and shun all the naysayers
eureka awaits
Lovely Haiku,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"