You are in another dimension where everything is of a higher quality, like a heavenly concept of divine relationship beyond earths knowledge beautifully sensually sublime and prescient...kudo's
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
This feels like an intellectual and spiritual connection, and a reservedly lustful desire to know more, to delve more, to experience an entirety of being.
Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
You have an interesting and unique quality to your writing.
... funny that Jeanette mentions "captivating", since your poem Captivated comes instantly to mind here... in fact, a whole series of like poems that are from October 2006. Raw, emancipated and triumphant, the clarity in your tone (albeit one of awe, wonder and fascination) pierces all darkness and summons all energies together in its vibrant proclamation. It conjures to me a kind of "Eureka!" moment that comes when there has been a slow-build of awareness and information gathering, but this is now become consolidated and totally without shadow of a doubt, as articulated by the incontrovertible persuasion of your beautiful last couplet. Visually and conceptually stunning, this is an arrow that directly links two unveiled hearts. Truth, by its inherent nature, is ALWAYS self-revealing come the right time and space; it cannot remain forever hidden. Some things just ARE and can't be manipulated, manufactured, influenced or changed. The Dream becomes Reality... the Dream IS, in fact, Reality because it is, in nature, a lucid dream, one that is known to be happening in actuality even while we "dream" it. The membrance between conscious states this poem slips between has been worn to total transparency and is as the dazzling reflection of clear glass. Brilliant and beaming - it's so goooooooood to see you smile, Kartero! :)) Kuasar Kate xx
Jude, this is a masterpiece! We are definitely on the same wave length, see my Indigo poem. Wow, what is it about the cosmos tonight, I am feeling powerful energy. Somehow dreams shared can be quite powerful. There is a shift in the Universe can you feel it? I am stir crazy this evening, wishing I was somewhere else right now. I shall go and meditate more and conjure up some magical visions.
Peace, love, and light, dear man, I love this poem it really is magical for me, anyway.
Amber :)
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
The scintillating lore of the unknown beckons to the curious. Nicely done!
If you are writing this about a woman, watch out, Jude, she is definitely one who is already getting under your skin. I love this offering and I love the feelings that it stirs in me. Makes me want to fall in love with someone very special again...the search is on!!! LOL
Take care,
Sherry
Jude,
I read this as a form of prayer, an acknowledgement of a presence, a spiritual dimension with all its power and influence, and the final line affirms wonderfully.
John
PS: this I can read perfectly
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2009
Such a stellar-like cry for recognition is this piece. The images of being surrounded and infused by the emission is very real.
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(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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Peace, love, and light, dear man, I love this poem it really is magical for me, anyway.
Amber :)
Take care,
Sherry
I read this as a form of prayer, an acknowledgement of a presence, a spiritual dimension with all its power and influence, and the final line affirms wonderfully.
John
PS: this I can read perfectly