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drops of sky
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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i was walking in the rain today,
my umbrella waterlogged
 
torn with holes making it useless
 
i was about to toss it into the garbage
then the rain stopped,
 
and the sun reappeared
though frayed openings
permeating its peforated fabric
below spreading clouds
 
no longer feigning
to protect my head and body -
 
the sky transformed
into blue polka dots,
 
the black umbrella
partially remained opened
in a rusty trash pail -
 
from now on, i’ll remember
to carry a folded raincoat in my back pocket,
 
to hell with umbrellas
 
of course, when the sky darkens
and the slicker is a pain in the ass
from carrying around,
 
it simply won’t rain
 
but I’ve grown accustomed to being teased
by drops of sky and partially wholly clouds

 

 


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 Reviews of "drops of sky"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 13, 2009
I can relate here. Just got a new umbrella for walking the dogs in the rain. I think I use it more for them than I do for myself. This poem is life in motion. Well done:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 8, 2009
LOL!! :)) I know how you love a good Gene Kelly rainstorm, Kartero. But the old "slicker" might provide a whole lot more useful coverage than a breached psychic umbrella when fleeing the assault of those unwanted polka dots of sky (even when they might desire to flood you in order to cleanse and soothe). Think Auguste Cot would approve anyways! xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
As aptly proved, the weather is fickle... Better than drops of Jupiter.

Ron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
I illustrated this poem. The funnest part was coloring your hair!

s

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Can't live with it, can't live with out it. Good little write. LadyJ

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
i enjoy smiling at mother nature, she has a way with the weather :)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Sounds as though mother nature is having a little fun with the blue polka dots. I find this this uplifting myself as rain is one of my favorite things.
Good to be back and reading you again Jude.
Susan

Reviewed on November 3, 2009
A much different write from you Jude but enjoyed nonetheless. Inspiriation can be found in almost anything for one as gifted as you.
"hugs"
Marcia

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
This is a really cool poem. The only time I know for sure that it will rain is when my favorite baseball team is in the process of a pulling off a major upset and it's the third inning.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Teased eh? Like a day in the life here.
It tickles me what can muse the poets mind.
Enjoyed!
r

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Such inspiration from special moments so well-shared via your verses, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Someone up there is just waiting, and them drop are tears of laughter, when again you got caught, nice one Jude! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
A terrific experiential write. It happened to me, too.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
been there, jude!
yet, waltzing in the rain beats tip-toeing on black ice ;-)
be well,
carolyn

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
i like this-light it made me smile

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Around here, this time of the year, using an umbrella will change you into an instant Mary Poppins! Bye-bye!

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
to hell with umbrellas

I decided that long ago; I feel strangely free now, like my dogs.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
I guess that is the difference in peoples makeup, Jude, I hardly ever carry my umbrella "in case of rain." Actually, like Amber, I love the weeping of the sky.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
So Jude you go to the dollarstore and buy one of those Ponchos that fold up the size of an envelope, no problem, don't you know it is when you aren't prepared it always rains. A great write Jude.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
First, let me say that I love the title of this poem. It seems that it would be a great challenge to have people write a poem with that title and see what it would become. The poem is great, so human and so everyday life. No matter what we prepare for, chances are that life will throw us a curve ball.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
Me, I'll grab a cab but I do know what you are saying Jude.
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
A Pam Ayers and/or PG Wodehouse moment.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Isn't that always the way?! Jude, I love how you've written this and I like the touches of humor.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 2, 2009
Jude, I prefer to walk in the rain, getting lost in it's scent and cleansing ability...I do get wet quite often, but my body and soul just drinks in it. Next time, just let the rain fall and see what it is like to really take a walk in the rain. I love that you ended with a bit of humorous lines, perhaps looking through those holes you can see with new vision and insight. It is with much peace, love, and light that I send to you this evening..Love to read you again. you have been missed.

Amber "V" :)


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