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twinkle
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the moment your dreams turn ugly,
is the moment the world excels
at befuddling your imagination
 
the moment your wonder
if truth is actually attainable,
 
and perhaps god is just an elusive trickster
offering cookies made of stone,
created because we feel alone and vulnerable
 
the moment you realize our leaders
are followers of an infected sect
 
and our governments are enabled
on a philosophy of laws
established by the hopes and desires
corrupted by the static nature of inert dogma
 
the moment you accept your place
in the drama of the human psyche,
within the schema of the universe
 
is the moment you will come into yourself,
and perhaps survive the moment you’re alive
in the twinkling of an eye

 

 


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 Reviews of "twinkle"
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 28, 2010
Rapturous! I love your poetry, the understanding behind it.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 11, 2010
Such moments are what we are made of and show how much we've learned (or not learned;-)Splendid as always Jude! ET

Reviewed by Rose Diaz
Reviewed on May 11, 2010
Very powerful and paints an interesting visual. Also, thanks for reviewing "Greed." :-D

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on May 11, 2010
This is an interesting and skillful attempt at defining a process that is so difficult to define by nature. A crucial moment that leads to something completely new; thrilling, unsettling, inevitable.

Axilea

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
It only takes a twinkling star to realize how small we are. That the dogmatic constructs of man pale in the moment we learn we are alone and on our own.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
OUtstanding piece...a thought provoker in my eyes!!

Lov etinka

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
A very well written piece here Jude. I wonder if we only discover the truth about many elements of life in a twinkling of an eye....that place or space between the synaptic relays of our cortex where the uha! moment prevails. I like. J'nia

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
There was a man standing in front of a rocky mountain wall, hopefully calling with his mantra, "open Sesame"..."open Sesame"...

Georg


Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 10, 2010
Very good poem, Jude

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
absolutely and well said!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
Jude,
You are so right, in a twinkle of an eye everything can change..it is this that I believe in for sure, also I want to share this bit about the power of Intention:

The Power of Intention
Seed of intention

“You are what your deepest desire is.
As your desire is, so is your intention.
As your intention is, so is your will.
As your will is, so is your deed.
As your deed is, so is your destiny.”
~ Upanishads

Simple in it's verses and simple in the understanding that it is all up to ourselves to be and live the lives that we so desire..

I wish you much peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
"...the moment you will come into yourself" - that's it, Jude!

John

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
perception is a mysterious event and the execution of a multitude of assumptions, facts and fiction -- selecting which we should permit to guide us is a crucial step -- truth often hides in venues we ignorantly overlook or simply are incapable of correctly assessing --value programming has an immense impact on our perceptions -- an interesting write Jude -- may peace and love be always with you my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
We deceive ourselves all too often with the untruths that we want to hear and believe.
fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
Ah yes life is but a twinkling of an eye & are we wise to know that in that minuscule time frame lies the difference between heaven and hell, the Creator or the pretender of desire?

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
I think God is an elusive trickster if we rely on others to interpret his meaning. But, as you so brilliantly elucidate, it is the moment you come into yourself where the essence of truth becomes evident. This is where we gain perspective, as we see ourselves in proper relation to the Universe. Great poem.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
"Cookies made of stone," (Rock of Gibraltar) religious mortars firing away, politicians reload, there's no such thing as a friendly bullet, the New Age brethrens learning great lessons about disloyalty from past dogma...cutting buttons off the corpse of the churchman's jacket...like Gibraltar, to survive, we have to have new leadership in religion and politics and get rid of those corrupting these places of outdated conformity, control and crooked propaganda...Since the anonymous "Designer" left no explanation, life's exact meaning remains a mystery...it's what contributes to life's enduring allure, a twinkle from our lead poet surely can't hurt and it --->

"is the moment you will come into yourself,
and perhaps survive the moment you’re alive
in the twinkling of an eye"

there are those of us who have a good fix on cracking the Zen code, where white raked sand and strategically placed rocks represent a tranquil sea and islands abounding with peace and abundance...


s

Reviewed on May 9, 2010
The Gods piss in my drink every once in a while, I just add a cherry, it takes on a whole new flavour, and look for that matter.
Yes Sherry is on to something truly flavourful, it could have been called a sip of life, you sure raised the foam in this barrel my friend, there is much to swallow. Bless you! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
Excellent thoughts to ponder. Well done.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
... we become alive in the twinkling of an eye, yes, as we see ourselves there accurately reflected and, perhaps, truly known to us for the very first time. At such a time of rapture, revelation or epiphany, scales fall from our eyes and we behold with insight the ways of the world around us and the truth of how things are. I pray that each and everyone of us would find themselves within that liberating twinkle - the moment of true enlightenment in the eyes of the soul of self or God. It's that EUREKA! moment, and I would suggest that it's THAT that comes first, rather than coming as a result of all your aforementioned... And Spain (... flying in and out of Gibraltar, in fact!!!) seems to have made me even MORE long-winded, so thank God for a short review! :)) xx Shine on, Syd! You will endure for more than a mere twinkling, of that I have no doubt...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
well said

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 9, 2010
All that goes on around us is just stuff, which if we are not careful, will have us missing out on our own life. Once we realize that the only person who will be with us for our entire lifetime is our self, is when we can really start living for no one else. The years we spend worrying if we will fit in, if we will be loved, if we can make the world a perfect place, if we can earn a decent living and if we can find happiness in someone elses dreams, are the years that we steal from ourselves. We are each unique and we truly are who we are; to attempt to be anything else is not only pure deception but also a lesson in futility. We each have strengths and weaknesses that we need to learn to accept as a part of the whole. Life is to be lived as who we are with all of our warts and bumps, and those who choose to love us, despite our failings, can find the joy of sharing time with someone who feels complete and comfortable just the way they are. Life is way to short for regrets, sieze the moment, live life to the fullest and when our time has passed, may we have left brilliant memories for those who touched our heart. This is a wonderful offering, Jude, and I hope I read it as you wrote it. If not, know that your words are subjective enough that each of us can find our shining star within them.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on May 9, 2010
Thoughts to ponder. Wonderful write, Jude!!

Sandie Angel :o)


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