I agree with Kate. The surrealness of this ku makes one's mind wander and this can mean different things for different people and can be applied to different views. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
... conjures in my mind all sorts of seventies psychedelia iconography. Lovely feel of the sustained pattern of the patient tending of "sungrown synapses", burning their furrowed trail through the dark-time mind with its habitual "loading". And I very much like the "bookending" of the words "sun" and "rising" in a ku about night, too, as if the dream itself is the dawn in all its resplendent glory. Beautifully reverent, hushed tone to this reverie: the stuff of visions for certain sure and, for me, could only represent JoBo's India/Mountain Time as per u! Me, stuck in a rut of a one-track mind?! Never! :)) xx A very neat little number, Kartero. Kangchenjunga Kate xx
Do tell what that dream was all about...I would love to see your colorful daydream/nightdream. It was about the time you posted this little gem that I myself was falling into my dream world..
Lovely poem, to delight and enlighten the mind and soul.
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Sheila
are still firing and creating
Much can be gleaned from 17 syllables
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May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
John
Top work, Jude.
Ron
Lovely poem, to delight and enlighten the mind and soul.
Much peace, light and love,
Amber
Makes one want to sleep, not wake up, it seems.
Great title, Jude
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