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reverie
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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a dream loads inside
 
sungrown synapses, rising
 
color, filling night  

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "reverie"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 21, 2010
A dream that, to me, symbolizes hope. This has such a soft, spiritual feel to it.

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
Is it becoming morning?

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 23, 2010
Jude, succinctly elegant my friend. May peace joy and love be with you. JonMichael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 22, 2010
I like the visual here. Nicely penned.
Sheila

Reviewed on August 21, 2010
good 5-7-5

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on August 19, 2010
metaphorically incredible!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 17, 2010
I am glad that your synapses
are still firing and creating
Much can be gleaned from 17 syllables
Peace poet ...
r

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
I agree with Kate. The surrealness of this ku makes one's mind wander and this can mean different things for different people and can be applied to different views. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
Jude...just right!

John

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
Icarus had a similar dream as he made his escape, make sure your night is not as blinding as his flight.

Top work, Jude.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 16, 2010
... conjures in my mind all sorts of seventies psychedelia iconography. Lovely feel of the sustained pattern of the patient tending of "sungrown synapses", burning their furrowed trail through the dark-time mind with its habitual "loading". And I very much like the "bookending" of the words "sun" and "rising" in a ku about night, too, as if the dream itself is the dawn in all its resplendent glory. Beautifully reverent, hushed tone to this reverie: the stuff of visions for certain sure and, for me, could only represent JoBo's India/Mountain Time as per u! Me, stuck in a rut of a one-track mind?! Never! :)) xx A very neat little number, Kartero. Kangchenjunga Kate xx

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
nice ku...from the inside out

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Didn't revive me. Still sunstruck.

Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
The worst thing about all those great dreams is that sometime you have to awaken and lose the whole thing...e

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Do tell what that dream was all about...I would love to see your colorful daydream/nightdream. It was about the time you posted this little gem that I myself was falling into my dream world..
Lovely poem, to delight and enlighten the mind and soul.

Much peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
little dream with mucho message,feelin good sir jude;-)?etw

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 15, 2010
Dreams are made of this.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
Oh the things we dream.
Makes one want to sleep, not wake up, it seems.
Great title, Jude

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
Spectacular disc burned in the mind's hard drive!

s

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2010
The gift of hope. Three lines speak a thousand words.


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