I want to be within an avalanche
descending downhill
across giant mountains
where virgin snow is blessed
and speed and skill are mere benefits
before the kill and fear wipeout
fate to bury
me in the solid flora of growth
I want to be inside a 500hp engine
primed for rapid acceleration
pistons throbbing up and down
and the groin’s gearshift
is headed into brand new avenues
across uncharted territories
releasing its exhaust to a timeless motion
lucidly lubricated
for maximum depth of highway
within underground canals
I want to stand above a waterfall
suspended on a tree branch
perched above the misty mass of sunlight
where the rainbow shifts to my being
touching me on neither side
rather running upwards
I want to tell the child
where to go when darkness and madness
prevail over the spectrum
of our planetary panorama
into the refuge of imagination
housing the synapses of creative light
I want to dream in couplets
or parallel worlds
and be awakened by the voluptuous verse
of wet rhymes
satiated with the syntax of wild kisses
healed by the sweat of your touch
This is absolutely beautiful and perfect. I loved this poem.
Reindeer
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"the refuge of imagination"... powerfully scribed, jude.
very fine work, indeed. you've got your synapses working at
full throttle.
carolyn
You have outdone yourself, Poet.
LOVE IT!!
xOx Phyllis xOx
PS: Almost said that I can tell you what it is like to be
buried in an avalanche, but I'd have to dig my way out first,
& I'm not at all sure I can. Sometimes inside that engine,
as well. Kidding. . .I think. GREAT POEM
Regis
Sheila
s
This is a definite keeper. And if you don't a little
company, I'd like to make the trip with you. -gene.
Be always safe,
Karen
last verse very sexy great imagery
Incredible work..hmm..isn't it always?
Blessings,
Vesna :)
Ron
Eileen
Take care,
Sherry
Wow!
Christine
Chip Bergeron
Donna
in a absolutely empowering way
seductive too and claiming!!
Vickie
So much to take in to absorb. I love all of your verses but the last one tells it all...healing by touch is the best medicine in the world. I'd love to heal you with my heated touch.
You are an amazing author, always pushing the envelop and delivering some very fine poetry!
Keep warm and keep dreaming, perhaps your dreams will come to fruision!
Peace, light and love,
Amber
Axilea
Newfie Hugs, Rose
This is very special indeed.
John