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out maneuver
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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my opinion travels into all directions
 
i am scattered like desert sands
spreading out
across the panorama of endless mounds
 
searching for an oasis
teeming with the juice of liquid thought
 
oozing into the body
aligned with earth and stars
 
i am surrounded by a host of sparkling grains
and sandy spaces
ebbing along the dunes of possible dreams
 
my opinion has little to do with my perspective
my bearing always outsmarts my being

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 Reviews of "out maneuver"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 6, 2011
emotion far exceeds its value when we make decisions - there is a primal call that lures us into its inevitable grips even as we seek to employ only intellect and facts(?) - so we find all of our positions uniquely skewed and laced with the dyes of faulted perceptions - weighted values have the scales of our decision making processes teetering precariously - it makes me truly wonder, are we even capable of unbiased analysis -- you thought provoker you -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 28, 2011
my opinion has little to do with my perspective
my bearing always outsmarts my being

... ah, so this is where the ideas for my comment just now on "spell work" come from! It's a lucid, fluent and fluid mind that can separate out the various elements of personal psyche into the different workings of opinion, perspective, bearing and being, Kartero. Opinions can be knowledge-based; perspective circumstantial; bearing dispositional and being spiritual. A fine mix to make a whole person but, if the spirit is strong, then this, in my experience overrides both mind and matter. You can out-maneuver because your spirit is strong, your element is air - Pan The Man! :)) xx

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on May 24, 2011
The last two lines say it all...this is outstanding!!

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 22, 2011
Challenging, jude. Great write. -gene.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 22, 2011
Thought-provoking. Makes me look at different angles of existence. Intriguing:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 22, 2011
There can be great disparity in how a man 'sees' and how a man 'is'. Your choice of the word 'bearing' (a word with varying definitions) is intriguing - I see it, though, in this context, as being your relevant relation or inter-connection with all that is around you. Enjoyed! peace to you ... richard

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 22, 2011
well said

Reviewed on May 21, 2011
the possibilities ignited in the lusterous burning sands......awesome.
Morgan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
perhaps too many directions without signposts
in our present desert, Jude; you explore lost
and i love the separation in the title;
the final line is a killer
because it's what we do over and over.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Wonderful! There's a saying that I heard that the clever man always outsmarts himself. Your poem brings that to light.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
You are always so aware of who you are,it amazes me!Your liquid thoughts should be bottled,you'd make a fortune! ;-)

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Jude, Jude, you never seem to fail, always you offer thought provoking poetry. I read this very late last night after spending the evening with my Alyse, designing and building a new outfit for her next rock concert. We had a blast.
Your poem struck a nerve within me as always. I slept on it and now this morning I awake to read it yet again.
My thoughts, brilliance, shining energy throughout. Realizations, peace, and clarity seems to speak out to me.
One of these days you will be finding your dreams coming to fruition. It's all about patience and clarity.
out maneuvering may not be what it is cracked up to be, but in any light, It is cool to be scattered like desert sands, out there mingled amongst like minded beings.
To be in alignment with the earth and stars doesn't take much effort, we all are one with the Universe. I value your ideas, opinions and your amazing ability to make us all really think deeply and profoundly.

Missed you, stay here on this mound awhile.

Peace, light, and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
It's just serendipity to me. But then I'm scatterbrained! A very intriguing write.

Ron

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Wowwwwwwwww.....this is awesome writing sweet Jude....have a wonderful and safe day...Hugssss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 21, 2011
Quite thought provoking, Jude.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
oh yeah, he's back....brilliant poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
learning to let go of opinions (so challenging!) yet is the way home

Reviewed on May 20, 2011
"i am scattered like desert sands"

Love that line, very profound. Thanks.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
I find myself, of late, more and more reflecting on that which I read...u are right up there with the people I read to reflect upon, you give so many good reasons to do so...e

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
You provide much to reflect upon here, Jude; and fine imagery to support your theme. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
"teeming with the juice of liquid thought" Love this line and a couple of others. Very nice offering, Jude; had my mind swirling in the aethers.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on May 20, 2011
I can relate. <3 this. xo http://www.janetcaldwell.com/


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