As always Robert you are so original and a master at writing top class poetry. I truly wish I had written this awesome poem.I am 'sizzling' with envy.
Love to you and yours
from
Kay

We can imagine this metaphor go on and on... Love the metallic bubbles of the melting antenna. Creative.

Axilea

What a metaphor!!

gotta love that sizzle, jude!

be well,

carolyn

I always enjoyed reading you even when I was ill. No wonder, you are a Great Poet.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

good poem. I like how you have used satellite technology to a fast collapsing relationship.
his antenna melts into metallic bubbles
impregnating the sky
Great image.

… LOL, it’s Debby’s “fireball at re-entry” image that captures my interest in relation to this write, Kartero! :)) As from one heavenly body to another, I think Sir Paul McCartney would like this one... And, of course, Ziggy Stardust: "Wham, bam, thank you, Ma'am!": just thought of that one! And what a way to go, together at last in the most highly conductive of environments, the watery oceans, as opposed to their perpetual counter-tension force field of outer space: a sizzle, not a fizzle for certain sure. A fall-out of feathers has mysteriously been invading my space over the past few days, so am very relieved that, as yet, cyber-debris the size of a double-decker bus hasn’t landed on my head! A big-bang “deteriorating” echo here that seems to be vibrating away nicely to me. I like the way you do dying… like colourful, psychedelic, 70s T-shirts… or a falling angel… Komet Kate xx

Ssssizzzzle is the word!!

Really, really cool for a hot 'un. (Melting antenna, indeed.;))

'Yowzer' just popped to mind.

'YUM!!' h-h-h-...:)

xOx Phyllis xOx


N: Mean 'shiny' ?

I say their love was too hot. It burned out too soon from its own intensity, just like a satellite. Nice metaphor for burning love. Creative genius.

Ron

Well that wash't what I thought it was going to be about.....Great midsirection, Jude, and a wonderful analogy.

Chip Bergeron

BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

I'd like to take that "plunge into the sea and sizzle ..." ;)

How appropriate and perhaps inspired by the falling satelite this past week and as Amber said a great methaphor for sure.
fee

Cleverly layered, raw and sophistocated poem!
Awesome style, and the ending..."and sizzle"

Hey Jude,
This could be called combustible poetry...wow metaphorically you really have done an ace of a job!
I love the last two stanzas, quite sexually stimulating and graphically correct..It would be great to experience such an explosion!

Much peace, light, and love,
Amber

We only HOPE they fall into the sea...e

..buried at sea~

clever!

Gotta love it, Jude, and I do. What a unique application. I'm jealous.

Powerfully sad.

a sizzling twist and what a fireball image they must be at re-entry

A strangely erotic and sensual offering, Jude...I think I LIKE it!
Take care,
Sherry