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age blossoms
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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           age is always a concern
 
        youth prevails in its staying power
            but due to its own inherent nature
          is first to be sacrificed
 
      the vim and vigor of expansion
                        grows and discards
         various stages
               of achievement and failure
 
       dreams of life
 are overwritten  
        by a subconscious desire of enduring
   its own circulatory spasms of breath
 
              cloaked as a spectrum of positive deeds,
succulent successes, frantic failures, inner strengths
                and outward weaknesses
                            all intertwined
 
    struggling not to remain in infancy
                          or even grow into it
 
               realizing
                     age is really not an issue
 but a seasonal outburst
              toward living ahead
 
        not to return
                               but to blossom

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "age blossoms"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 26, 2011
success and failure are a homogeneous blend from which life gathers its spiritual sustenance -- progress is not possible without the benefit of the power of opportunities mishandled, misunderstood --jude, to bloom there must exist a stream of fertility -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend-- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
In physical terms it seems we go from infancy to infancy, but, in spiritual terms, if we appropriate all we have experienced in this journey of life positively, the refining of our soul burns ever brighter and we transform in ever-increasing abundances of glory... it might only be as a diamond in the rough so far, but beneath its frail fleshly disguise, the true gem of our being is always catching the light - blossoming indeed! We are ALWAYS moving forwards - even if our perception is that it's currently a circular route. Upwards and ever onwards, dear Kartero! xx

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Your talent is aging upon superb elegance in the mastery of your Uni-Verse blossoming into others eyes.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Tremendous insight, Jude. Riding the edge of the wave with this. I wouldn't trade the wisdom aging has given me for anything. I would, however, like having the resilience of youthfulness on-going.
Peace and continued inspiration ... richard

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 17, 2011
Thanks Jude, for this haunting reminder that I have arrived
at that stage where I'm in full blossom. -gene.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 16, 2011
How very true Jude, age is ALWAYS a concern.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
Dear Jude, You are entirely right. Age can help us understand even a little part of our life. Well written. Love Emile

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
The whole youth/age issue has somethingn of a "Hare and the Tortoise" feel to it. You've capturted that nicely. Thank you from one nof the tortoises...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
Wow....another deep and beautiful blossom of a write from you Robert
...I always love walking through your garden of words.
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
Kay

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
As usual, one for the ages. Seriously, regardless of what we do, age blossoms in us all, as you have so well penned here.

Ron

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
I love the way you intertwine successes and failures...all good...wise insights into how we break, grow old, and so blossom.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
Our state of mind regarding age is everything. If we continue to be active, on a daily basis, a lot of the discomforts that we associate with aging are not as agrivating. Life is all about reassessments and as we age, we need to continue to do that. Perhaps many of us begin to put all of our eggs in one basket instead of allowing our dreams to be vast and limitless like we did in our youth. If we do that, one setback or failure is the end of all that we are using as our focus. Continue to bloom deep into the winter of your years and you will see age as less of a handicap.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
A lot of wisdom contained in these verses my friend and it is almost ironic that we never truly appreciate our youth till we are old.
fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
Old age is not for the young...e

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
well said, jude. may each blooming season bring the bliss of joy...
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
Age is much more than just a number. It is the decaying alive to the point that sometimes all we can do is lay in a bed, unable to speak, or see very well, cant hear, waiting for the final release which eventually does show up and by then we are so out of it we aren't grateful as we should be. No, I'm sorry, but age is not but a number.



I quite understand your meaning behind this well-written poem, Jude, but age, in my opinion, is pain and suffering.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
Jude, this is absolutely stunning.
In this verse one can feel the ease that the poet finds at being united with creation.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
Blossom On!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 15, 2011
A poetic and forensic evaluation,
Jude, in finest language for complex thinking.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 14, 2011
I love that you ended this with a very uplifting message...blossom on,dear Jude. Age is but a number, it is all in what you feel inside of yourself, nothing else really matters...that old saying You're as young as you feel. Live life to the fullest, go have lots of fun and live in the moment...you only come around this way once, so why not enjoy it to the fullest....
Much peace, light, and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 14, 2011
I LOVE this message, Jude. It is very meaningful and most appropriate for me. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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