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oh wow
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             we’ve only got one shot in life,
          that’s what they say
 
 yet, there’s new research
                  to keep you going
             for maybe 200 years
 by slowing down the aging gene
   after all, it’s successful with round worms
 
   wow, 200 years on this planet? 
           you’ve got to be kidding, right?
      wouldn’t that be a cruel joke?
 
         can any brain endure such abuse?
         can any soul absorb so much beauty?
               
      one shot, is that it?
               isn’t there some grand mystery
           after that shot is over?
  
                  me thinks mr.apple,
                grand innovator inquisitor,
        got it right
 
after all, his dying words were,
            “oh wow, oh wow, oh wow”

 

 


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Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 27, 2011
jude, in the misty and veiled unknown we are not alone...with the latest plans to make the 99% unwilling organ donors for the 1% this is probably achievable...me thinks the 99% will awaken and the 1% will lose!...longevity has its rewards...it is however the quality of life that is the measure of man...exposed to love, peace, good health and true friends life is a wonder, a marvelous journey...I bid you joy, love and peace my dear friend...Jon Michael

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 22, 2011
no worries, dear poet, beauty absorbs abuse hands down!
"oh wow, oh wow, oh wow" = "ram, ram, ram."
carolyn

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 21, 2011
Never realised me and round worms were one and the same thing, but if science says so, it MUST be correct!! :)) Sure he got it right and our souls can take very much more than we already give them credit for! What we see and experience in the flesh is, I'm sure, only the tip of the iceberg in spiritual terms and yet also a hint, a flavour, of what might be ahead.



Yes, I believe in life after death and I don't believe it's an option: The soul DOES live on. And, like many, I believe that our choices here determine what's to be experienced on the other side of the veil - call it heaven, hell, nirvana, karma, rebirth, reincarnation... we'll get our dues. And not based on "works", I don't think, but on an objective Truth - but what is it? The Man with the Blueprint knows and it's up to us to find out...



can any brain endure such abuse?

can any soul absorb so much beauty?



... all I can say is, we ain't seen nothin yet, Bro! :)) xx

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 20, 2011
200 YEARS OLD???!!! OH, WOW!!! IF THE LORD ALLOWS ME TO LIVE FOR 200 YEARS, NATURALLY, THEN I'M ALL FOR IT. OTHERWISE?...FORGET IT!!!(SMILE) THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 20, 2011
There must have been something radically different in the atmosphere, or in the ground water, back in Old Testament days, when those people lived so long. Love the insight here. Peace, and a Happy TGing day... richard

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 20, 2011
the one per cent will be queueing
up to buy the elixir..just hoping
as a ninety-nine percenter it'll
not come to pass in my time...that
death isn't an option is the best weapon
humility has.
Strong one, Jude.

John

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 19, 2011
I sense a bit of sarcasm about the cruelty that life puts some of us through. But I, for one, would like to see the year 2100. From what I know of history, life has gotten better for humans with each generation except for a few times when ice ages, disease, or other calamity slowed our progress down.

I am optimistic that we will transform ourselves within this century when faced with the perils of our excess and learn, like we always have, how to survive and prosper without having to be greedy and carnivorous.

By the way, as far as I know the human lifespan is set at about 120. Roundworms, koy, and tortoises may have longer lifespans that can be manipulated, but I doubt it.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 19, 2011
200 years on this planet?
you’ve got to be kidding, right?
wouldn’t that be a cruel joke?

A cruel joke indeed, especially for someone like me, who now mourns our modern day loss of respect for all life, every day now.

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
How your words will age for 200 years and beyond bu book worm readers,

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
Surely this person must have had a glimpse of the paradise beyond this life! Living 200 years? Not unless our scientists come up with amazing advances to keep our bodies and minds younger and more alert. I don't think most of us will see this in our lifetime. But, hey, try for the brass ring and give life all that is in you and enjoy the ride!!

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Carma Chan
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
Jude, this reminds me of a cool poem I recently found on page 317 of E. E. Cummings Complete Poems 1904-1962, that starts out

Space being(don't forget to remember)Curved

I share your sentiments!

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
I'd have the shot and then get run over by a bus!
Seem that in this society, age and death is a failure.
Much depth in this poem. The worms have the last laugh any how.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
Great light-hearted whimsy in this one!
Well irrespective of age, one thing I'm sure of is that these bodies, whether young or old, house ageless souls!
But on another note, living fully is what matters to me, and I don't want to grow so old that I can't live with energy and aliveness.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
200 years is fine, if we can live in relative health & not get older looking or feeling...on second thought I am too far gone right now, let it end at a more normal age...e

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
When I read about his final words "Oh Wow, oh wow, oh wow", I feel that he was really in awe of what a wonderful life and family he had. And perhaps he had a glimpse into where he was about to go...The afterlife might just be filled with that Wowness...

I really don't want to live for 200 years, too much for a soul to take, I would rather come back and do this over again and again, learning more and more each time till maybe I get it right finally...

As always your poetry is mind altering and soul searching.

Much peace, light, and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
Two hundred years? I'm having enough trouble absorbing the changes of my 65 years.

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
"Oh WOW", indeed!

Anyway, researchers never always right,

just think of the well blessed Methuselah,

Who lived 969 years and he died. (Genesis 5: 28)
No one will live above that!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
Mankind sometimes interferes much to much...I agree with the "oh wow" though I have to admit I used to have a real fear of death, however, as I have become older I am now at peace with it..my faith is my anchor~

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
a Kool write jude
I think he was awing at his surroundings
as he exit, this pit stop
on his way to paradise.
Peace be with you......

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
I think s too-enjoyed the write!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 18, 2011
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
When I saw the title I was sure that you were quoting Steve Jobs and I was right. He would have liked to live longer if he could have been healthy but the truth is that he learned to live a life that suited him and made him very happy; wealth was a side effect for him, not a necessity or a status. We should all persue our dreams as he did. 200 would just be too old, I think. Who makes it past about 60 without some kind of nagging condition or ailment, scars from surgeries and just from living life? Dealing with those inconveniences for a while is doable but if I knew I had to live another 140 years, I don't think I would approach each day with the determination that I do. Enough is enough. Gonna get a tattoo on my chest right over my heart that says Do Not Resuscitate...underneath that is gonna say "I really mean it!"
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
This is awesome!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 17, 2011
Steve Jobs and Jesus Christ good ol' boys! These lines remind me of the American Beauty Pasta wrapper. What happens to macaroni when it's cooked too long?

"can any brain endure such abuse?
can any soul absorb so much beauty?"

Kindred Spirits and 80-proof,
Sage


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