A very moving and beautiful poem.

... so love the changes! After all, you already write the story so beautifully, who would want to "rewrite" the script? "i wait for you... show me the way" meets "Comet of Asgard"; with my own work I can't remember what I wrote yesterday, but with some of yours I have uncanny recall, particularly for image and nouance. Crescendo libido vibrato! A libretto yet to be written in Pan Galactica, perhaps! Another roshan write, Kartero. :)) xx

perfection, jude! have you written the musical score for this aria?
now, where did i stash my opera threads?

<running naked through the fog clothed in the film unknown worlds coming and going...> you are a conjuror par excellence, poet.

peace,
carolyn

an excellent title for a very cool and sureal poem .~ Morgan

Adorning words of heart!
*Jude*
Captivating my visit with You!!

Lady Vivian

good one!

like a spell cast upon the winds

A Poem catching my attention and taking my breath away. So much said, so much inferred, that only connnectivity of two souls can understand the velocity of this kind of love. You write with such a passionate heart and a knowing soul.

As always you leave me speechless with your poetry!

Peace, light and love,
Amber

When we are truly connected to another, the dark clouds lift...
This is such a beautiful and mystical piece!

Somewhat enigmatic to say the least.
Has the feel of a love poem, where he and she... and she and he... just want to be. Without intrusion.

Someone had best be an amazing lexicographer!

Hauntingly powerful words, Jude.

Hopefully, we can write ourselves into a nirvana like that.

Ron

the journey of a lifetime to the next you depict with an individual perspective -- awash none the less with hope and promise to steer -- this is an introspective work worthy of sharing with everyone jude --I bid you peace, joy and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Words can be both powerful and enduring, as are yours.

For some reason, as I was reading this, I was hearing a Leonard Cohen song in my head "Dance Me To The End of Love. At any rate, this is a beautiful offering, Jude and a dream that we all share.
Take care,
Sherry

..and let the score be in D, the sweet key;
this stirs and moves me, Jude, it reaches me deep.

John