There are gems and there are diamonds. Then there are words from the soul whose treasure opens hearts and lives. Patrick

Breathtaking poetey,Jude!!! Beautifully crafted phrases!

Anna

Showing the Heart of Your Soul *Jude*
with this one!!!as Love begets Love!!!

Lady Vivian

And as Meatloaf sang "you took the words right outa my mouth"

:) Simply Awesome, ty for a timely reminder of what i know is the truth.
xx Cherie

Bob, as well a great writer of philosophical writes and such, u r a great romanticist...as seen throughout this write...

The second stanza set the tone and for me this was better than sessions I usually pay $40 for.
Thank you Jude

jude, the depth of contrast is stark and stands the test of truth in love -- strength and conviction reassuring timidity and despair -- evokes passion on unprecedented levels of human encounter -- I bid you peace and joy my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Romantic writing that touches the heart and soul. Joy L. Hale

such beauty in this write--and such tenderness and love!

you don't write this way often, but when you do, it is pure magic

... not only does the earth move but the restless oceans swell within this one, Jude, allowing the oiled rope of the soul to let slip its moorings and drift wonderfully on those enigmatic seas. Crescendo libido vibrato! A wonderful companion write to libretto, and one in which you mutually satisfy your own request to:

"write me a script
where I cease to exist,
yet kept alive
by your enduring words"

... she must surely be needing CPR after this breath-taking write! :)) There's also an uncanny "creak of leather" here which I've just realised is one of my favouritest sounds in the whole wide world. Timing is everything - perhaps even more so to two hearts that tick outside of this temporal timeframe. Our internal universes are infinite in their capacity to create and are ever-expanding. Glorious work, Kartero! You know this is wholly beautiful: you've already translated it into your gold filigree font! xx

I really enjoy your romantyic poetry, Jude. It has a way of being very expressive without being cloying or mawkish. It's easy to see the deep connection you have with your loved one.

Chip Bergeron

absolutely beautiful :-))

So soul-reaching, heartfelt and so very full of "love" meaning; I am happy that I can relate completely to what you have expressed through your verses here, Jude. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Absolutely blew my heart on this one...should be on a card or plaque, hopefully engraved in someones heart..awesome Jude!

Very very impressive piece of poetry
You showed the tender vulnerable side of you, Jude.
Not many will do.

Kudo's

db

I read your poem before bed last night and it took my breath away ... When "timed with the universe within us," the heart can tune in to the vibrato of souls quite intently. Beautifully written, Jude. A very tender, moving poem ...

The universal oneness of love, beautifully expressed.

Ron

You've accomplished something (here) quite beautiful poet; embracing me as a soothing flow of warm oil through the synapses. Excellent title. Well done! peace ... richard

Great poem moving into the soul Jude.

Rose

A song of deep desire and love as you brush
the wipe the tears away..Spellbound vibrato in
this beautiful poetry ~ jude ~ Lady Mary Ann

Way to go, jude, good poem.

Profound! as strong hands and a gentle smile are always a stunning combination, and you blend your words as a poetic master!

your speaker fulfills one of the primary roles of any poet (but you are not just any poet): namely to make the reader feel a presence without actually being present, to give the present of passion to those who may not feel particularly passionate, and what is more in this poem of so much more, to give a vibrancy to those whose 'reverb' pedal may be a bit sticky... and that may be the case for far more than would care to admit to it. Thanks for the amplification.

Jude,
I felt as if I was right there in your dream, Jude, your verses just exeplifiy depth of emotion and beauty of soul.
It is so wonderful to be able to hear and feel that vibrato of souls.
Simply stunning and heartfelt poetry...This has to become one of your very best poems!

I watched Sylvia last night (the film about poetess, Sylvia Plath). It was quite intriguing. She married Ted Hughes (the poet) She really had quite the life.

Much peace, light and love,
Amber

Quite lovely, and it's always quite marvelous when hearts find a home again.

This is like waking up to a beautiful dream, this morning, Jude. A three sigh offering.
Take care,
Sherry

There are no words to tell you how beautiful this is.