where do we go after we die?
notably, to a place where no one’s alive
what do we do when the sunset is gone?
dream of the twilight?
surrender to the dawn?
when our bones are grounded
or incinerated into ash,
does the wind blow our souls
into an afterlife we grasp?
is there sound or sight,
or absence of light?
a heaven or hell,
or another spell?
I wonder, as I am still alive,
does the spirit persist
and continue to survive?
or does it remain as a vaporous thing,
without the will to dance and sing?
my query will be answered
when the time is right,
when I fly on into that mysterious,
indelible flight
when the time is right,
when I fly on into that mysterious,
indelible flight
Your words awaken thought and reflection, Jude. Your theme is universal and timeless. Very nicely expressed. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Take care,
Sherry
God bless you,
Deborah
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
a beautiful flight *Jude*
Lady Vivian
Chip Bergeron
when the time is right.. one ever so in peace..
Lady Mary Ann
Ron
:) Janna
Pretty heavy questions for a Monday morning...I was so inspired by this poem, I wrote a response on my page. Hope you like it, as much as I liked this poem of yours. You raise questions that everyone our age seems to be asking. My feeling is that the afterlife is more wonderful and energetic than this life...After all one can dream right? lol
To another thought provoking poem as always you make your readers stand up and pay attention!
Peace, light and love,
Amber
Peace always,
Roger
Rose