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scream song
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a child screams

an adult yells back at his screams

 

both feed off each other’s inability to listen

by speaking meaninglessly

 

both are incrementally strangling

each other’s desperate voices

 

i think they should

take up singing lessons as soon as possible

 

perhaps they can mellow out

with a serenade

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "scream song"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 4, 2012
tru~~~~a song me as parent know well

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
Screaming... a terrible vice especially when directed at children! Music and laughter are so much better. Wise words, Jude.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on January 28, 2012
Music for one's soul *Jude*
in the wisdom of your words!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 27, 2012
... they need to tune in to the vibrato of each other's souls, right?! The "magic" of your work is that it always has the ability to take us some place other than the "action" of the piece itself; in this instance, it made me realise that, having experienced a childhood that had a lot of actual day-to-day madness in it, I was actually consequently frozen in my emotions, a very passive and self-controlled little person. I probably didn't scream enough... not AT anyone, you understand, but just to let it all out! THAT would have been a kind of serenade to the child within. Perhaps you can relate. Anyways, Kartero, thanks for opening my mouth! :)) xx The sweet old boy at my residential workshop on Tuesday, apart from "serenading" me with his sweet beckons and soft, cooing whispers, was also alternately prone to sudden violent outbursts, as if articulating pain from his deepest past. Illustrates my point, I think. Love Sage's tuning forks! Hearing you as ever on this one... xx

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on January 26, 2012
jude,
My husband came from a family of nine children. He said he can never remember them fighting. A miracle! Eight kids in my family and we did our share!:)

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on January 26, 2012
I like it that at the end of this piece, we are allowed to smile. You give us something to reflect upon, while highlighting the absurd.

Axilea

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Approaching a situation calmly and with dignity will solve the problem a whole lot sooner and easier than yelling.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Yes!!! Not enough people sing together!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
yelling never fixed anything, singing sounds nice

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
great advice!!! I was inspired by your indelible flight;-) that pic is fantastic,are you heading for Hollywood hehehe...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
“Come on everybody, scream and shout” (the Beatles). I think you may be onto something here. I'm pretty mild tempered and rarely raise my voice. Unfortunately, when I do, it's because I feel that I'm not heard. So I speak louder and louder until it becomes what some people might say is a scream.

I see people screaming in their poetry here–screaming for help. A poem can easily become a song, like, “help I need somebody… I need somebody to love… (The Beatles).

Ron

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
A novel approach indeed. It always seems to work on Broadway doesn't it? Patrick

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
We have this problem of yelling at each other instead of trying to listen to what they have to say. Children have an excuse...they have no experience. We adults have no excuse. Before a serenade can be sung, at least one party must stop shouting and start singing, no???

Chip Bergeron


Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Mellow to my ears the sweet song of seranade..oh for that
this morning getting Keegan ready for school !
Sweet renderings ~Jude Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Whispers are louder and appeal to the ear~ a serenade is delightful, I cringe every time I see an adult yell at a child in a store etc...I so want to pick up the child and comfort them~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Hey Jude,
I hear you here...I have first hand experience with my grandson and my son, sometimes my son thinks if he yells louder Kason will listen..wrong...He's learning, soon they definitely will be singing a serenade when little Jude is able to sing, he already hums to his Nonni and tries to sing La La La, adorable.. Love this light poem that sends life's lessons to us.

Peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Mellow Serenades are far more soothing. Probably why I like walking in the woods, listening to the birds.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 25, 2012
Wise words which all too often fall on deaf ears, Jude.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 24, 2012
tuning forks and pacifiers...music of the spheres rock of ages cosmic octaves skip kindergarten.

s


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