maneuvering (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 6, 2012

Excellent observations, Jude...do i also see persistance poking her nose around th corner?

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on February 8, 2012

... have to agree that it's those "simple" "fits of muse" that are the most highly-charged in terms of igniting the inspirational touchpaper. It's comforting to know just exactly who's at the helm of this magical mystery tour, Senor; I've been dying to know what comes after Bruckheimer's "On Stranger Tides", that's for sure! :)) xx

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 7, 2012

great poem.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 4, 2012

Man do I understand this one...always enjoy you

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 4, 2012

Its that persistence in steering that gets tough sometimes...great poem, Jude
Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on February 2, 2012

Charming poetic journey filled with continuing awareness ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ragno Donna

Reviewed on February 1, 2012

Steering is so important, watch out for those cracks in the sidewalk!

Ragno

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 1, 2012

We each must learn to "bob and weave" to get through life, in order to be able to maintain our focus on our goals. Well stated, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

Of your poem *Jude* to muse the musk in a strawberry
field would be channeling the beauty to the beast...

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

So many emotions swing,
some are high, others are low

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

Keep on that old reliable str8 & narrow...no veering as if u do you may run into an immovable object...e

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

One must live a life to express one. An ornery muse is a definite plus. Persistence always pays. Patrick

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

A smile comes to my eyes for the essence of
your poem captures your source and style of prose
for a dreamy heart. Fabulous write Jude. Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

You have described the nature of the great poet. And changed styles.

Ron

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

I like this, jude, very well done.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

Steer On, and keep ducking those daggers.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

Jude,

So many thoughts go through my mind,

as I know that I will find,

ways to make my days relaxed,

bring me unduly taxed,

but in it all there is a light,

that tends the fire and leaves me right,

So now I say to you my friend,

always be writing to defend,

Your honor and your brilliant mind

and know that you will find,

the greatest joy and peace and love,

enlightenment from above.

You are the master poet! Let that muse keep inspiring you!

Peace, light, and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on January 31, 2012

Dazzling bit of wordplay here, Jude. So what's new? You are AD's master, "the" master when it comes to writing poetry that far exceeds mere mortals.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 30, 2012

and may your fuse burn ever bright!
carolyn

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 30, 2012

You have come far. In matters of the heart's pursuit your cosmic tomahawk (good throw) is right on course leader of our poet people. Intercept the daggers and embrace the heart reincarnating...cuz that's what it is, you know. Maneuvering is tangible meridian where your muse awaits in the stardust visible in the comet's tail...

eternally,
s

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2012

drop by drop our bucket fills
and buckets blend worlds within worlds
around the spiral ever spins
flag after flag forever unfurls
these are the thoughts your poem inspires
fanning poetry's flaming fires

be well always, jude
and at peace with all those you meet

Roger

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on January 30, 2012

NOTHING LESS THAN 'AMAZING'...THIS COURSE WE FOLLOW...ISN'T IT? YET, I WOULDN'T TAKE ANYTHING FOR MY JOURNEY RIGHT NOW. AND IT SOUNDS LIKE NEITHER WOULD YOU. WONDERFUL WORK...VERY MUCH ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE + HIS INSPIRATIONS