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dream juice (e) ... cachoo
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           walking across the edge of cliff

   decorated with blue, green and red lights

          flickering on and off

    like a pulsar’s composite x-ray

        arriving from the depths of space

 

        the colored globes appear to go on forever

   into the contours of this dreamscene

 

there’s a lighthouse in the far expanse

                       beaming directly toward me,

             pulling me into its bubble …

 

 gazing downward

     I see sparkling waves crest to my right

        Illuminated by the full moon

              and the jaggered pattern

     of the cliffs before me

 

          lifting up into the air like a bird taking to flight

   to a nest of fabulous fluorescence

              toward a glowing egg

       of enigmatic proportions

           

 the lighthouse is almost within my grasp

            as I suddenly fall into the waves below

 

   and now the sensation of drowning

              awakens me in tears

 

                      I breath in

                 I sneeze out

 

                         cachoo

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "dream juice (e) ... cachoo"
Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on March 14, 2012
Love the dream juice cycle.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 11, 2012
This speaks to me of the flight homewards, Jude; all those "landing lights" guiding your way. The wind and the waves are only a temporary setback, yes, probably summoned and gathered through a spirit of trepidation and a fear of loss or of "not making it". A desire for "nesting" and the giving and receiving of nurture spring readily to mind: hope that cold doesn't go to your chest! :)) xx

Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Wow. An afterglow of switched realities. You took some ripe bunoh of grapes hanging on a mental vine and pressed them into a fermented master stroke of all-ready to eat warm and gooey raisin toast for the soul.

starman

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Gashundheit(sp?)...e

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Your dreamjuice has reached the boiling point,don't get burned! Glad you didn't drown!;-)Another winner!

Reviewed on March 10, 2012
I am with Roger, that's the only thing that's going to save ya. Gesundheit, "Good Health" spiritual of otherwise Jude!

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
gesundheit, meiner freund...

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Bravo for a boisterous awakening!! Even if
for a box of tissue beside your bed *Jude*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Hey Jude,
If I had to analyze this dream, I would have to say that you want to fly toward something or someone, and the lighthouse is your beacon of hope and always manifesting hope and joy you start to believe and then gravitate toward the light, the ray of hope for fulfillment and happiness, but there are always obstacles sometimes dangerous ones, sometimes fear is the obstacle, you become overwhelmed by your flight and fall toward that fear or danger, and you feel like you can't continue, you are drowning but your soul wakes you up with the tears from your heart, that heart that will always guide you on your journey toward wholeness, perhaps the breath you take in, is a cleansing breath that causes you to sneeze out all the negativity that was responsible for the fall... Cachoo...is a good thing...what a dream scene and man you are on a roll...Great work, sometimes I awaken during the middle of the night and have to write my dreams down otherwise I will forget in the morning.

Much peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Awesome the lighthouse colours. Falling into the waves below. Tears. God bless you !
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Bless You! :) Looks like you were distracted ... I've had many dreams of drowning before and I'm so glad I don't anymore ... Stay Focused, sweets ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 10, 2012
Beginning with the cliffs is beginning with danger, of course. You will avert possible danger if you can just get to the lighthouse, even as you begin the lighthouse quest you look below to what you are leaving, the cliffs, but now you are in the middle of a scene from yonder where a huge glowing egg seems to be giving birth. Paying more attention to the egg than your step, you misstep and fall into the turbulent waves below and begin to drown.

"cachoo" yo'self, Jude . . .


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