Beautiful Haiku, Jude, well the American version of Haiku, I am told. It seems that the Japanese Haiku are quite different due to the language...none the less, I find that within these few words a meaning, visual and sensation that exceeds them.
Take care,
Sherry
I am illiterate. I do not understand theme. Can you enlighten me? There is more than sophomoric poets like me here thankfully, that would be able to comprehend it. Jude, I would like to know more. I love the word groupings and imagery!
... like time-lapse photography of dewdrops on petals, this explodes with and explores the multidimensional, magnifying passion that is interleaved and impregnated with an evergreen vernal vibrancy. Heady and exotic! xx
Rainbow hues of Love from God's paint brush
given the scent by your poetry....*Jude*
Lady Vivian
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2012
...a hint of colour and an aromatic aura, held in a zesty diurnal hue... good for you for this delightful ku ku ka choo choo chugging down the AD track...
So much said, with so few words...I can smell the passion, and it smells mighty fine. Did you know that rainbows are all about rebirth, loyalty and integrity. The color of your heart seeps into this poem in technicolor words.
Take care,
Sherry
Starman
ET
given the scent by your poetry....*Jude*
Lady Vivian
Peace and more peace, my friend...
Roger
Lovely and delicate Jude
Lady Mary Ann
So much said, with so few words...I can smell the passion, and it smells mighty fine. Did you know that rainbows are all about rebirth, loyalty and integrity. The color of your heart seeps into this poem in technicolor words.
Happy Dreaming,
much peace, light, and love,
Amber