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her life is flooded by forces

             she tries to keep under control

             

   when night descends,

she notices shadows

    scoot by the corners of her eyes

 

         she accepts their presence

     to be secret thoughts

                        passing through her imagination,

           like ripples coming out of nowhere

                 from the middle of a pond

 

               she converses with the wind

     as her soul dances across the moonlit sand

 

   together they perform a holographic ballet,

            a perfected form of action

                           devoid of motion

 

         sometimes the windy howl pushes her about,

                       yet she always celebrates

                                        the verve of her unseen muse

              and the verses written by its invisible hands

 

                the waves soothe and excite her,

                      stars serenade inside her eyes

 

        the expanse of the milky way

                        is captured in her unspoken words

 

                 sometimes angels scold her

    for doubting her ability to manage her dreams

 

                              she then loses control

                     surrendering to their reasoning,

 

                     succumbing to their wishes

     while signing pages

                      imprinted in the sky

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "signing"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on May 24, 2013
To catch the essence of an individual on the hook of one word is a true feat of "poetivity". Write on! M.True

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
jude, your verbal "holographic ballet" has transformed the press of the universe into the human mold of expressions - a work to savor with herbal tea and soft light - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on May 3, 2012
"she" is one of a kind, amazing portrait.

Reviewed on April 30, 2012
the first two lines blew me away.....this poem is stunning.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 30, 2012
This is another one of your masterpieces capturing the essence of "Her" character!

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on April 28, 2012
Signs of a great poet *Jude* when captivated
by reading each progressing line as you write
with such escalation of emotion by verse!!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
Reviewed on April 27, 2012
A captivating dream only ever dreamed by the seer. I love your words in this lovely piece. You must have gained much contentment while composing it, as I did from reading it,

peace and live
dan

Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
Imaginative vision that plays with different dimensions, worlds both unknown and familiar. Love those pages imprinted in the sky...

Axilea

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
A soul satisifying offering. Very nice, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on April 25, 2012
your poetry voice is so very beautiful...

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
Ah what do angels know anyway? Patrick

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
I love all things to do with reading the heavens and the harbingers thereof and therefrom. "Her" soul sounds to be always beautifully in motion and in such harmony of living vibration with her elements that the effect is almost one of profound stillness. Another beautiful work of your pen and your heart that flows effortless as the wind. Just love those chiding angels she's at pains to both appease and hoodwinkingly tease, keeping all her many prodigious plates spinning along with finding the time to simultaneously sign and autograph the skies. Sage's initial comments make me smile, too; think she's been sniffing the Dreamjuice! :)) Good to glean from this that you're neither hard of hearing nor still visually impaired. Stay tuned, Kartero! xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
Superb, I felt like I just watched a muscial come alive on ocean waves, visuals vivid~

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
You still speak to me with your lush imagery.

Reviewed by Janna Hill
Reviewed on April 25, 2012
Exquisite Jude. As I'm listening to The Black Crowes & watching the sun rise...
:) Janna

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
the entire poem is a 'holographic ballet'
but with definite motion and excellent expression;
love the soulful metaphysical dimensions here, Jude

john

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
Lots of magic words in here. "like ripples coming out of nowhere/in the middle of a pond" There is terrific fluidity in this, and grace. It is a floating runaway scarf on the breeze feeling for me when I hear it: "...invisible hands" of the wind -- and "she then loses control" brings texture and dimension, a nice surprise. Loved this one, Jude. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
“She” is quite elusive, but I think you are talking about mother Earth.

Ron

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
SAD...BEAUTIFULLY, SO. THANK YOU FOR SHARING, JUDE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
Beautifully penned, Jude ... A delightful read this morning ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
Love the rythem in this and the ending is perfect..."while signing pages imprinted in the sky" creates an instant mental image of the work.
fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
so beautiful!

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
Verses, images captivating reverently with the wind
as her soul dances across the moonlit sand. Beautifully penned Jude.
Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
A very nice poem, jude. I like it.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
Hey Jude,
I was so restless last night, fell asleep at 12:30 and missed this beautiful post. It touches my being. Lovely, lovely poetry very inspired and heartfelt.

Thank you for being you..

Peace light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
Truly captivating, Jude. I especially like:
she converses with the wind
as her soul dances across the moonlit sand


Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
Excellent write Jude.


Rose

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 24, 2012
telepathic cunieform autographed with cosmic particles of the spirit's being of matter...a "ghost writer" employed to write the Dream...does she support chapters of intelligent design or is she a hologram of Evolution dispersing starseeds to evolve a new-age Mayan blueprint of a 13th strand of DNA added to the 12th strand?

s


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