sensual erotic and captivating
the visuals are seductive too
I feel like I am spying in lovers
wow what a way to start my day
(note to self: For Sweet Dreams Read Jude at bedtime)
Cherries & Whip Cream
Vickie

genuine introspection - the heart, no place for the timid to venture - the rewards are the greatest of human experiences, the failures, the most tragic - jude, you've been there, or your interpretation would not be so perfectly vivid - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Growing love...such a beautiful experience
*jude* that you so lovingly describe....so
comfortable will be the space for two!!!!

Lady Vivian

ESTUPENDO, KARTERO! :)) Am blown away by this even more than golden gondola - another recital please! If gg was your soft pillow-talk, then this by comparison is sheer exuberance and release of the pent energies perhaps referred to in exit wound. It is both profession and confession and how triumphal/victorious is love and admiration expressed rather than suppressed. Here the rampancy of your bejewelled soul is visible and its radiant beauty can be celebrated and enjoyed by all. These lines are especially fabulous:

only the most enchanted dreams ripen from the sacred skin

flowering from within the contours of your body

You have made of this muse a temple lit by your own sparkling, fragrant flame of devotional attendance. This is breathless stuff, Amigo, and it's clear that all your senses and synapses are alive to their fullest extent here. It amazes me how you seem always at your most tender when making botanical references which, given your location, interests me greatly. You're a born nurturer and nurseryman, Senor. PLUS, I really like that you changed the title back again although, of course, "growing into" would be very apposite in the light of what I've just said. You're on a roll - and are taking us with you. Dream on! :)) xx

JUDE ...

HOPE SHE APPRECIATES THIS !

strong introspection, Jude,
and with deep personal warmth; the heart
is on trial and it's beautiful to behold

john

so hopeful and adoring this poem!

A place in her heart… That's nice.

Ron

Such spaces are quite rare, and even more rarely shared. Blessings indeed to be counted. Patrick

"you have invited me into the space/you have always inhabited" That line exudes abundant surety, security, trust, and truth. I like how you finished on the upswing note, "...growing into" without the object of the preposition being supplied; it is a hanging chad kind of breath. Neat. ~~ Diana

Hey Jude,

This is without a doubt the Jude that I know. Sensual, alluring, heartfelt, dazzling, dynamic and total poetry in motion.

You have really outdone yourself this time, my dear man.

I am really in awe of the way you can articulate and communicate through your soft words of knowing what to say to get this reader's attention. Bravo, a magnificent piece of deeply reaching poetry into "that place in the Universe!"



Much peace, light, and love,

Amber

The longing is always best, before consumed, you are surely in a state of intense appreciation at this moment, prolong it, prolong the passion of which you speak of Jude, you have intensenly described "IT"

Intense, hopeful and passionate. This is beautiful, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Bob, your muse must be working overtime of late...keep all these great writes coming...e

Love. There is nothing like it to infuse the heart with sentiments otherwise never thought of. Congratulations on your exciting discovery Jude.

Sounds like your soul has packed up your heart and moved into a new place of universal love...well done Jude.
fee