very seductive!!
your poets voice is beautiful
I love the closing line as well

Dreamscapes & Passion Fruits
Vickie

Extraordinaire is this rendering essence of dreams.
Lovely Jude.

Lady Mary Ann

A feast for the senses, dwelling in dreams.

Ron

giving in to the temptation of taking a chance on another's dreams. well done. thanks for share

asa

What a lovely place to be Jude and how intoxicating are these fruits... this intoxication is called love. It reads as a song to my soul and sweet dreams to my mind.

Lovely Jude

Love and Light
Lily

there are moments and lines here, Jude, when the
Song of Solomon echoes; this work is both precise
and personal and broad and universal
and tender, oh so tender

john

enjoyable reading, sweet dreams ;)

May your dreams be fruitful *jude*
and sweet much like your tenderness!!!!

Lady Vivian

a feast for the imagination here!

As long as rent is not charged for that residency...e

To me this is more than sensual Jude, it is soulful and surreal.
Give yourself a hug, a high five or any other self congratulatory gesture you choose. You deserve it.
:) Janna

Yummy!

I don't know, is this legal, I mean getting there without being under the influence, watch the Fed's don't catch on to this, the DEA would most likely want to talk to you, this is way beyond Penthouse my friend, it's time to change the sheets, bless ya!

Consistent with the "botanicals" that I mentioned in review of "adornment" yesterday and the stimulation of your most dominant olfactory sense, this sends a message of the sweetest of communions in the Temple of the Gods, and whereas "adornment" gave the impression of adoration at the shrine of the beloved, this, in turn, seems to represent the Goddess stepping off her pedestal to minister the choicest of those libations left at her altar upon the speaker's own lips - a delightfully disarming touch that democratises the love union. Probably my experience of singing close to The Pantheon at the breathtaking Stourhead Gardens over the weekend colours my thoughts here, but this undoubtedly also has shades of your old Palette of Desires painted afresh in the rainbow of the Bacchanalia instead of the original monochromes of its grainy cityscape - the "Penthouse" Sage refers to, perhaps! You indeed have found your space, Amigo; time to move in! :)) xx

This Man-x kitten loves the caboodle. Snugly. Love the chance to pick the fruit of your brain to see how you come up with such consistent metaphors without, just barely, crossing the line to make me man the life-boats. Well done, Jude.

Hey Jude,
"then lie down in your lap and take residence inside your dreams", what a way to live...One can only dream of such wonderment and beauty and passion.
I like that you ended this on such a sensual note that brings this reader to the brink of...........you can guess what I mean here.

wow, another synaptic wonder from the master of the Poetic Universe.

Peace, light and love,
Amber

Ab-so-lutely! The lines of this one, Jude, just rolled off my tongue as I recited it aloud.It is filled with color and taste and fermenting delights you can only wonder about. One of your sensuously best!

Marvelously penned; sounds like quite a residence to be in.

a sumptuous poetic reverie, a robust repast

Voluptuous and image packed your offering takes the mind to delicious places.
Take care,
Sherry

Jude,
enchanting visuals here, thanks for allowing us to see.
Budd

The poet captures the yearning of wanting to fulfil the passions struggling in his heart and soul. Great write Jude.
fee

two words: Penthouse Letters. now for the review. metaphorically lubricious. tangerine and guava passion fruit inspirational chin ups.

"then lie down in your lap and take résidence inside your dreams"


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