To me there's a lot of eroticism here this is a poem that packs a sneaky little punch.

Chip Bergeron

jude, metaphoric excellence - "to be and ultimately not to be", expressed and hosted in a statement of primordial lusting - how much better it could be, I cannot imagine - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Oooooooo... bite me off a piece o' that! Think I've just made a miraculous recovery!! :)) Besides the obvious definite "feel good" that this most exhilarating yet sublimely tender (as others have said) extended metaphor gives the reader as it seeps into the synapses, it is also wholly satisfying in a holistic sense of the wonderful bringing together of the essence, purpose and meaning of life as can be experienced in physical, emotional and spiritual climax. This poem could also be a picture of what "vision" is, without which we wander, wither and die. This is truly a Forese Olympian write and one of the very best to showcase your poetic voice, I think. Superbly unique in both expression and concept. I love it. In fact, an Olympic athlete could exemplify this whole effort and visionary process well, given their punishing training schedule to get those muscles into shape to win the ultimate medal; they must truly know what it is to be both gods and total unseens, experiencing that deific flux on a daily basis. Resizing requires both a penetrating realism as well as a perception of what's really what, coupled with the unquenchable pursuit of dreams. You've certainly struck Gold with this poem in my book. Keep your eyes fixed on your desired prize, Kartero. xx

Jude,
Tender and beautiful.

Blessings,
+Linda

Expansions for the mind *jude*
as enlightenment in your poem
for one and all be true....

Lady Vivian

While your words wanted to push my thoughts to a more base place, I forced myself to see the deeper more profound meaning here, Jude. This twisted my brain in multiple directions, kind of short-circuiting me so early in the day but provoking complex thought, none the less.
Take care,
Sherry

Wow Jude a mind extravaganza. So vividly sensual yet so tenderly enlightened.
I found myself drifting into this dreamlike state of mind
As I read this stimulating piece of work. You never
Disappoint this reader and furthermore I only want more of
What you have to offer. Bring it on. I need more forese poetry. Missed you much.
Peace light and love
Amber

to experience the deific flux of being

alongside the drama of nonbeing

Quite powerful, my friend.

It's hard not to come up with a few cliche responses and be a bit snarky but, this is deftly crafted , creative and the mind can surround itself around a dream.

and on all the dreams it will assemble :)

Lady May Ann

As usual, you have gone beyond the pale. The fact is, there is no bone in a Boehner (I meant to say boner, but my voice system left a better word–;-)).

Ron

..now that is a potent heart~ Masterful

A weave of cerebral sensuality and ripely admirable nuance. ~~ DIana

this has teased my brain with some new words and played upon delightful concepts

I'll be honest my mind was just in the gutter......love the way your mind works :-)

Isn't the brain wonderful? Laughing at Ed Matlack! Wonderful and pleasurable write Jude forese :)

Love and Light
Lily

Awesome as usual Jude . You help to make my return to the den so much easier after realizing how much I've missed. I bow to your pen. Mikii

Hah! Ed said it for me.

A pleasurable orgasm of your thoughts, as always...e

A much satisfying ejaculate of thought indeed,,,,bless ya!

intellectual erotic synaptic pondering;
exquisitely phrased, Jude, a high pleasure

john