misty design (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on January 12, 2013

We are all mere mortals swept up by sands of time...A great write Jude!...M

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Reviewed on December 16, 2012

Misty design' There it is. fabb stuff.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 13, 2012

That happened to me... ...and then, she changed her mind. Thank you, Jude. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on December 12, 2012

Aspiring to clarify the misty design is the task of a life, that requires clarity and vision. It also works better with love and great trust. All the facets of an encounter that develops into much more, in my opinion.

Axilea

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on December 7, 2012

sand aggregate and water are shapeless until the hands of man blend them into concrete, then almost any form and endless functions appear - so it is with us as we have been formed, simple dna from a misty design we dare to imagine - this is creative work jude that challenges our imagination and forces us to delve into the misty slopes of our creation - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 3, 2012

Indeedledoo, Kartero. One of your expansive, perfect utterances which quintessentially expresses the heartlonging and perennial search for the "lost" other/mother/lover which many of us experience in one form - or a combination of all three. This breathes easy, as if in the forthtelling of ancient acquired wisdom and revelation. A spell in the wilds obviously does wonders for both the clarity of your vision and the strength of your beating heart. Estupendo! :)) xx

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on December 2, 2012

simply stated but, very complex. Lovely.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on December 2, 2012

this is so very lovely Jude
and as always, your poetic voice
is utterly beautiful...

Divine Universes & Aura Jewels
Vickie

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on December 1, 2012

:) thought creates form...
I enjoyed the depth of this writing
You give us much to think about always...
rather like minded we are, you just express
it more here :)

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on December 1, 2012

ah the mystery of mist... socked in and saturated like a deluge of depth, this poem permeates as it probes with purpose through the reader's psyche... I love the imagery and the metaphorical purport... nicely penned, jude... will come back to this again for another read or two or three, I am sure...

Roger

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 1, 2012

I'm with you. I'm amazed at how science is beginning to unravel our heritage through archaeology in DNA analysis.

Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 1, 2012

As mystical you are as ever, Bob...e

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory

Reviewed on December 1, 2012

Hi Jude,

I have the same problem in the morning, until find out where I left my specs.

Mor.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

beautiful~~~stolen moment in time

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

Love the journey and those rainy streets of time. Love this poem, so clearly articulating our misty design.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

*jude* You are the star
designed to rise out of
this mist..

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

Your poem put me in a romantic mode. The mist, the memories, looking for her face in the puddles and streams of life. This is poetically brilliant, Jude. *****

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

Jude,
A brilliant and extraordinary encounter of our misty design
to become enriched by your thoughts.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

Hey Jude,
I agree with Sherry, this is absolutely beautiful poetry in motion. I would never reject the idea of any of your work, you are always spot on accurate not only with your surface meanings but with the depth of emotion that is felt when I read your magnificent poetry!
This poem really touches me deeply, and it is worthy of a recitation.

If you should recite this poem please let me know I would love to hear it.

Much peace light, and love,

Amber

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

This is really beautiful, Jude, I couldn't have said it better myself.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

Great job, jude, I like it.

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

Beautiful

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

Beautiful writing. I love the last line.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on November 30, 2012

The last line is mystical and closes the poem so very dramatically, Jude. I like your otherworldly premise in this and many of your poems, and the use of the type font goes a long way in enabling this otherworldly premise.