Nice ride! Relationship are all about perception. What is hidden, what is shared... M.True

Multi-faceted words that allow the reader to interpret this love e-motion as an initiatory process. Interesting perspective.

Axilea

jude, enlightenment i am certain can be the beautiful shared experience you allude to in 'rush' - a gentle giant erasure of the preconceptions we all hold willingly, or not - "will assist me, to meet the alumni i've never known" is a powerful expression of the concept that moves me to a higher plateau - i wish you love and peace my dear friend - jon michael

Wow...a catch her if you can poem...'stampede of dreamers'wow again...
that is so beautiful!

Jude you describe the kind of relationship that makes each party more than they could ever be without each other. Top shelf always.

Particularly exquisite, Jude.
Blessings,
Christine

A most serene write. Indeed, another's life force does have the ability to transcend another, if aligned.

Another fine explorative meditation, Robert. Never rest your quill.

I really like what John said, may you forever re-generate! never stagnate or cornered.

sensed the yin yang weaving within and without the space of this expression, as one arrives the other retreats, such is the flow of existence.

A beautiful reciprocity exists here, the lovers knot of catching and being caught seamlessly in eternal combination and alchemy of essence through the porous membrane of a mirroring effect. The ability to bleed freely - when balance is achieved through this mystical transference of imparting what the other lacks - is life-giving and cleansing/clarifying. Love the idea of a Glorious Glitterati, an Aspirational Assembly of dreamers stampeding along in earth or sky, like a storm cloud in the desert. And yes, we can truly stand alone and set oursleves apart when suddenly coming face to face with the one who has inspired or enabled us to move among them. Here's a thirst for quest and conquest that sets up the blood-rush of expectation, excitement, purpose and determination. Looks like you've been consorting with The Greats during your long vacation; welcome home, Kartero! :)) xx

"...to free preconceptions
so the vessels within me can bleed freely"

is, for me, at the core of this work,
the liberation and understanding the poet
is after..(not that you, Jude, need either,
your talent is abundant)

yet each of us desires that 'hit'

this is so worthwhile

john

What a rush! Good one jude.

Ha! I love Sage's 'wave oscillation' poetic style/theory! That's what you are, Robert, a wave, a scientifically romantic feeler of fluid convolutions.. Delightfully so.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Jude,
Secretly love of your heart immerses freely,
breathlessly and purely to catch the scent.
Lady Mary Ann

You only have to look through the crack of the universe to find me :-) Enjoyed this :-)

Glad that you are back after your breakaway. With poems like this, I doubt if I will ever catch up to your following.

Ron

This poetry comes in the form of wave oscillation. The "Forese Sponge" absorbing intelligence, thirsty oscillations, motions that repeat themselves...sinusoidal. Waves are everywhere, ocean, earth, matter, sound, sight, electromagnetic...and "rush" Forese poetry, embedded in fluid flow, the poetic continuity that keeps your readers coming back again and again, Jude...also this piece has shapeshifting qualities when analyzed...

s

A revelry in the running
for love only you can
convey so beautifully

Lady Vivian

What a wonderful vision you have presented
I can clearly see many moving in unison...
While your object of desire watches to pull
you free...

Excellent Jude, I echo Amber encore!

Love and Light
Lily

You have done what they say poets are suppose to do; that is to make the words come alive and shape, mold and create images within the readers mind.
Cheers,
Dan

Beauty personified, yet so incredibly personal. Very nice, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

What else can I say than whats already been said...good to see you, Bob, where you been of late...e

So much here that is not really here at all...like the fist phrase, it's a little more than a little elusive... what is especially evocative is the citing of the scent message, that aromatic allure cascading into the cataclysmic serenity that comes when we realize as we joing the throng, the innumerable host of dreamers, that we are all together and this is not our first rodeo...moving along, little doggies, moving along... I thoroughly esconced myself in the perennial now of future perfect tension inherent in the final line "I have finally catch up to you" and this type of breaking is the breaking of a "strength broken by strength and still strong"... good, so good to have you back among us again, jude.......exquisite, delicious, delectable, dreamy, celestial, cerebral, beautiful, awesome and artistic...



Roger

Staying with the stampede of dreamers, Jude, is the only way to fly, and you have a hell of a handle on it . . .

Rush On!

Hey Jude

So clearly stimulating and inspired!

Your return has been long awaited. You bring us a clear picture of your journey toward fulfillment !

Run, Jude, run as fast as you can toward her Chi!

Much peace light and love

Amber

Ps recitation please!