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limited recall
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

i never wanted to leave you alone

under cobalt sky and neon stars

 

a mere skeleton

housed by spirit and thought before I would see

 

i’ve accepted you’re long gone

into that universal hum of space without form

 

so now I stand before this silent vestige

scripted in stone winded by both time and place

 

and still wonder, how your voice sounded

and your eyes melted into words and dreams

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "limited recall"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 10, 2014
well said

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 27, 2013
excellently worded as always an enjoyable read
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Karen Springer
Reviewed on July 14, 2013
Lovely dreamscape

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 9, 2013
A metaphysical questioning of human relationships, I feel both the physical and psychological dimension of time and space and the way our memory interacts with them.

Axilea

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on July 4, 2013
It's funny the things we think we would remember but we don't. Yet our heart never forgets. Sometimes it hurts and other times the memories bring smiles to us.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 22, 2013
:) You may feel that you left her lonely beneath cold skies and inscribed testaments of stone but the truth is she has never left you and you would know her voice anywhere and in any crowd if you were to audibly hear it - even for the first time: you instinctively know it from the womb. Love that "universal hum of space without form"; makes me think of Aslan singing the created world into existence in The Magician's Nephew. Perhaps in the same way, you are also calling forth her words and dreams from the 'silence' she has left behind. In many ways and in many of your "ghosty" writings it seems to me that your sympathetic, synergistic energies are mutually channelled. And from mothers to fathers... Hope your Daddy-Day was a good one, Kartero. xx

Reviewed by Fakhre Hyder
Reviewed on June 22, 2013
There are voices in the stars.
peace and light, thanks.
Fakhre

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on June 13, 2013
Blimey, I visited dads grave for the first time. I understand such shadowy depth of thought threads.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on June 12, 2013
"into that universal hum of space without form"
nicely penned, jude.
be well.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 10, 2013
This "speaks" to my soul because I live it every moment. Thank you for sharing this gift, Jude. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on June 8, 2013
Tender is the poet in You,
jude
so much love in your heart
for soul's depth to recall

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on June 7, 2013
~Jude~
Scripted words written on the vestige..alone now you soulfully
reach for the voice and visualize the eys melted into words
and dreams. Colbolt sky and star gaze empathy for the spirit.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 7, 2013
I can see you standing before a tombstone and penning this poem in your mind.

Ron

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on June 7, 2013
To be left with only memories or worse only memories of others that have been conveyed, as in a family member who passed before we were given a chance to create our own memories of them, is a difficult bridge to cross. There is a certain haunting that occurs as we struggle to put some physical association on our emotions that we have for them. This one pulls deep into the soul of the reader and twists the heart just a little bit harder.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Teresa Walker
Reviewed on June 7, 2013
Sometimes I till hear my Fathers voice in my mind, also my Grandma that I was very close to growing up. I have even smelled the smell of her out on my walks. They are just beyond us, waiting for the day we are called home..

Very moving Jude!
Bless you
Teresa

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 7, 2013
Jude,

We are left with beautiful memories. When they live in our hearts they never die. Excellent, heartfelt poetry, Jude.

Many blessings,
+Linda

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
Hey Jude,
Your last three poems read like a soul's journey
Limited recall stands as it should, a finale' as the soul gets prepared for the next leg of your journey toward your destiny. We all have lost someone that seems forever gone in many ways, our limited recall enables us to move forward toward peace and enlightenment. I am sure you are being watched over and loved for the beautiful soul that you are. Tread lightly amongst angels and know that you are loved.
Much peace light and love,
Amber


Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
It is the energy of being that you tease. The mysteries are left for the rest of us to ponder. M.True

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
Thank you Jude...I lost my wife in 2011, and your poem reminds me of what I've lost.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
absent of a wife's tale...but a marker of urban tragedy, truth is we’ve gotten so used to being in the here and now skepticism we now dismiss the handful of tales that are demonstrably true...poetry is a healer and 'limited recall' is an epitaph read by cosmic scholars and they've passed the message on to her, Jude...she knows the oration is spot on with moods in motion...good to see you posting pre-summer solstice...I predict the muse will treat you well this season...be well.

s

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
Yes, a cemetery stone seems so little with regards a memory of who is buried there...e

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
Beautifully done and a bit surrealistic to boot, Jude, but it is you writing it so I am not at all surprised. Your voice is dynamite, my friend.


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