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driftwood on September shore
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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              the September shore

gave me more than a sandbox to play in

 

                    or an ocean to keep afloat in

                    or huge waves to channel my of fears onto

 

          it gave me moments of such perfect clarity

     and moments of such sublime surrender

 

                  I gyrated internally between each wave

 

       the September shore gave me the chance

to drift

         on the tidal draw

while inhaling the salty, brisk, clear air

 

     it became full of motion

                   while refreshing all my dreams

 

              each emotional aftermath

        became soothe and moist 

               and perfectly perceptible

 

                   the shore that always reinforced life and death

                its stench imperceptible

    through the final aroma

          of late summer flowers

 

        its driftwood remained

                       in a magnificent chain

 

 a spectacular sculpture

  drying under the sun

 

over-shadowing all that other objet d'art

      gracing the September shore


 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "driftwood on September shore"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on March 6, 2014
One of my favorite visions - driftwood. Each piece a hand made sculpture of the the water gods! I stand with you on your imaginary shore. M.True

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 1, 2014
as always lovely, uplifting work

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 27, 2014
line 15: 'soothe' and moist? Interesting; it is a very soothing meditation, but also very smoothe and deeply connective. I set myself the task of decorating a plain mirror by edging it with driftwood from the beach in Aberdovey when we there, right at the beginning of September last year; never finished it! Perhaps you've just done the job for me. :) xx

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on February 27, 2014
Lovely reminder of all we can learn from observation of the sea. I like this very much. I'm a September baby. I will keep this in my Virgo file.
Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
beautiful expression brought out here! A driftwood drying,gracing the September shore, it made my day because i saw something similar but couldn't make any sense of it until I read these magical lines here JK

Reviewed by steve patterson
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
good write. i like the format, it puts the poem in motion. good job.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
This could easily be set to music.
It captures a mood
much like Sinatra singing The Summer Wind...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
Evokes a sense of peace and tranquility after all the kiddies have returned to school. A time to reflect on, "all the other stuff."

It seems that several poets here were psychically connected while writing their hearts out overlooking the sea.

Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
Hey Jude,
I have to tell you, I feel such a lightness in this poem. I am not sure if you wrote it back in September, but I could feel those waves washing away all your worries and fears. The ocean does that to many.
I myself go to the shore often, no matter what season, in order to be revived. Something about the shore that really floats my boat and of course you are on that shore feeling all the positive energy flow through you like waves of salt water and sunshine...ummm I miss that!

Spring is coming, the shore is looking better and better!
Peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
"perfectly perceptable,' I like that. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
~Jude~
Sublime surrender perfect clarity in spectacular art.
Visions and sounds of the shore refreshing ambiance.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
Autumn shores are marvelous; and I now look forward to Spring shores.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
such beautiful visions
budd

Reviewed by M Flack
Reviewed on February 25, 2014
Such wonderful imagery.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2014
So beautifully written ... So many wonderful verses I can strongly relate to ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 25, 2014
i imagine the shore is a delight of sights and sounds to experience, could hear the seagulls while reading

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 25, 2014
Our point of view colors our surroundings, Jude and you so beautifully tell that story here. If we let go of our preconceptions and just live in the moment, in harmony with nature, even the usual and mundane can take on a special beauty that can change the way we see things, forever. The mood of this offering is serene and fresh.


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