Hey Jude
I get it. Sometimes a title just grabs me and I have to read that particular poem. Your right titles can be way to long or sometimes they make no sense!
You always make your reader think!
Peace light and love
Amber

~Jude~
Forwards, backwards extensively good.

Lady Mary Ann

This morning's readings have me enjoying watching 'title' change before my very eyes. I relish watching creations in the works, being sculpted by the artist. This poem feels like a curious mobile writing. Floaty, abstract, grinning. Good that you put the ** in, responding to readers' ?? about it. I didn't know this either; but because I like abstractness, it could have meant everything and nothing and still been a good egg. ~~ DIana

So many people lose their bags while getting on board or perhaps they are dyslexic. Anyhow, you spotted your bag. Cool.

Love ya!

Jane

I'm with Sherry on this poem, buddy.

Creating your own escape plan, only to realize the unplanned factors in the way.

this i understand
budd

We have to put the right things in our bag, if we want the right outcome.

I am not sure that I follow your line of thought in this one, Jude, it seems a bit cryptic, to me. I didn't get the idea of a trip or meeting someone as I read it over and over, more just a sense of contemplation and your own internal struggle in the matter. I didn't associate "my bag" with luggage more personal baggage. Either way, it is certainly subjective and does provoke a thought process so I would say you were successful. Whatever choice you make in the matter, I hope it pans out for you.

Nice one Jude! Mary

Aaahhhh!!! Going to meet someone? Have a great time. Nice poem of reflection.

Sandie

Perfect poem for me tonight. Going to NY soon. I like this. It skips.

pack light for the flight | two-way ticket boarding pass she's worth it | tell her I said so from the window seat her clouds are your tomorrow

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