Very Spielberg and a nice bit of magical realism goin on here. Can't pretend to know exactly what's goin down but perhaps that's the idea: just demagnetise and make with the anti-acids anyway. Reminds me of the ball-game scene from the kids' film, Hook, which was the turning point at which Pan saw his own 'life's subjective form coalesce then collectively disperse' and where his own perspectives became crystal clear, strengthening him for the fight. xx
Hey Jude
Sounds like a lot of soul searching going on here ! It's always good to hit a home run. You can play in my ball field anytime!
There is so much to read into here but overall you have written another Jude masterpiece !
Peace light and love
Amber
this was wonderful to read! now i know the different stages of a smile, from a closed one to an open jaw dropping, all teeth showing, eye wrinkling genuine smile 'cause i did those while reading your piece.
...it batters up!...when you try to figure out...what's
bothering you and why?...keeping the ball up...at the same
time.
I felt each word of your extraordinary poem.
It really conveys a clear image of what life's baggage
is of your own choice...if any...Yet, having to live
one of...all the things...stress doubts anxiety whatever
else...provided by others.
Couldn't nail the source...so...you put "them all" to the back
of your mind...for so long...All of "them" making you
acclimatized not to listen to yourself...anymore...Till
"they" became intolerable...and finally...you addressed
"them" here...so skillfully.
Now...balanced out and seeing "all the things" having
a knock on effect...on each other...time to take a focus
off "them"...bring it back to yourself.
Again, I think, it comes down to giving yourself all those
things you want from others...never to deprioritize yourself
and...find your "authentic self" and happiness...just to be...
Thank you Jude for sharing your thoughtful poem.
"wicked souls and virtual doll
heads" hits a home run and everybody missed it...the World Series of poetry right here on the Bronx diamond around her finger...footlong hot dog and suds.
Gawd, I wish I knew what you are writing about with references to getting "to first base" and "long balls" and digging out from the dugout. Baseball got your tongue?
Sounds like a lot of soul searching going on here ! It's always good to hit a home run. You can play in my ball field anytime!
There is so much to read into here but overall you have written another Jude masterpiece !
Peace light and love
Amber
bothering you and why?...keeping the ball up...at the same
time.
I felt each word of your extraordinary poem.
It really conveys a clear image of what life's baggage
is of your own choice...if any...Yet, having to live
one of...all the things...stress doubts anxiety whatever
else...provided by others.
Couldn't nail the source...so...you put "them all" to the back
of your mind...for so long...All of "them" making you
acclimatized not to listen to yourself...anymore...Till
"they" became intolerable...and finally...you addressed
"them" here...so skillfully.
Now...balanced out and seeing "all the things" having
a knock on effect...on each other...time to take a focus
off "them"...bring it back to yourself.
Again, I think, it comes down to giving yourself all those
things you want from others...never to deprioritize yourself
and...find your "authentic self" and happiness...just to be...
Thank you Jude for sharing your thoughtful poem.
Sandie
"wicked souls and virtual doll
heads" hits a home run and everybody missed it...the World Series of poetry right here on the Bronx diamond around her finger...footlong hot dog and suds.
s
Ron
Love ya!
Jane