dreams' revolving doors (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2014

one of your best, I'd say. I love the line 'and cloven fotted hoven monsters'. I think I've battled them once or twice myself.

You last two lines say it all. Only we can break through those doors.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on May 22, 2014

good one

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 13, 2014

Ah, an old friend in life's asylum. Got it all going on in the family camp atdemo. And fits in with my May podcast, too. A comforting, companionable write to have whilst breaking out of the Cuckoo's next. xx

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on May 11, 2014

We all have dreams. Sometimes they come true. Sometimes they don't. Effort and luck and planning make things happen. Dream big. Dream small. But dream.

Patrick

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane

Reviewed on May 10, 2014

So true. Life is like an arena. Some act better than others. Very well penned.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2014

I remember this one and you recited it too ... great to read it again ... wonderful as always ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 8, 2014

It's up to us - how so very true. And quite a needed message today since these days everyone loves to blame someone else for their problems.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on May 7, 2014

Deja vu, I know this one, nice to see it again... it's a great refresher, as lately I've had to remind myself of this very thing "transcend and break through"

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 7, 2014

Being a bit more analytical, those damn "revolving door" dreams can be a bitch. Some nights, kick as I can, I still can't make a dent in the Plexiglas toughness of some of those turnarounds.

Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 7, 2014

Hey Jude,
Yes it is up to all of us to be responsible for our own mental well being. Living in the moment is the key to being mentally healthy!
My poem "Completion" is a response to this poem!
Stop the revolving door cycle and walk through that window of your dreams and live in the moment!

Much peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on May 7, 2014

...and just when you've managed to break through, here comes another
set of revolving doors! And so it goes.

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn

Reviewed on May 7, 2014

Deep! How are we all actors in a way. And indeed also spectators. Well done! Grtz, D.T.

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on May 6, 2014

Gestalt could not have said it any better.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 6, 2014

Well...It's a mad, mad, world! And we all need to learn from inside that revolving door. Learned are those who would go in one way, and come out becoming smarter.

Sandie

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on May 6, 2014

Sometimes some people never "get it". I got your act right here, baby!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by audrine max

Reviewed on May 6, 2014

sounds great, but i wanna see how everybody performs