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old fatalists
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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sometimes “old fatalists” are misread

especially when they are just momentarily
resting their weary bones

observing the goings-on of what’s going down

furious or funny
hostile or holy
it any case, it’s interesting to engage in viewing

so they decide
to observe experience from a distance
instead of jumping into its sea head first

though they’ll never quit swimming
or surrender and drift away into the sunset

they always dare themselves to ride the riptide
though they know there’s a lighthouse in view

the dice may not roll favorably
hearts and diamonds may not open sympathetically

yet these long-standing players are really quite triumphant
since they haven’t had their asses broken too often

or lose their entire pot in one shot

they still continue to take chances on events
others don’t even know exist

actually, their main flaw and weakness
is divulging their closest words,
ideas and dreams to others

but I don’t think they'll ever give up
trying to break through those doors

or forfeit their best to inspire

though sometimes they may have to be reminded
not to miss their turn

                      

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 Reviews of "old fatalists"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 22, 2014
well done

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane
Reviewed on May 18, 2014
I love your perspective Jude. You have highlighted it so well in this precious poem. Kudos!
Mary

Reviewed on May 16, 2014
Life forever changes before our eyes...
It is why I live in the moment, the minute, and
the second and observe the beautiful things before
me in nature... life is too short to allow the negativity
to creep in... therefore... do not miss your turn to inspire...
however you choose... :)

Great as always Jude

Love and Light,
Lily

Reviewed on May 14, 2014
Hearts are not favorable in this realm nor fatal, negative, or not nice. Maybe a little out of line. Fatalists, not paying attention sounds about right.

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
old fatalists, are we not at some point joined their seats and observed?
take action or write it in paper. i'd say, let's make a list of what we have to do first.

enjoyed reading this. :)

Reviewed on May 13, 2014
Life is like a kaleidoscope, it constantly changes; but we all know what colors we want to hold on to in order to be happy. Happiness comes in many forms too, not just floating imagination in the air which can disappear in any second. If we need happiness that lasts we need to build it with a solid foundation.

Sandie


Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
EXCELLENT, Kartero! :) Another flowing conversational piece which uses the paradoxical metaphor of the card-sharp so well (being both voyeur and game-changer) as well as the language of chance. As we are all too well aware, timing in life is everything. Old fatalists need never fear over-divulging if they believe que sera-sera anyway. And might be congratulated for their persistence in seeking to facilitate and teach along life's highways and byways when they might otherwise think 'what the heck?' Goodo. Will therefore keep lookout for you steaming past in that black leather jacket, white headscarf and set of purple earmuffs soon, then. WTG Amigo! sKate xx

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
They are there everywhere. Sometimes feel like laughing , It is better to let them free JK

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
I appreciate and reflect upon this perspective of yours that you have shared through your verses. Thank you, Jude. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on May 13, 2014
Taking chances is what makes life fun..............especially if one comes out on the good end. I like this write of yours big time!


Love ya!
Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
These old farts you are talking about look at life in the Bob Dylan sense, "If you ain't busy living, then you be busy dying." And if they pontificate a bit upon their long experience, so be it. My father, after being relegated to right field at around 45 by the softball team he played on, began to wonder why he was hanging around with 20-year-olds. I kind of wish he would've kept playing into his 60s. That kind of activity keeps one young.

Although I learned to swim when I was seven enough to make it out of the pool after a dive, and I earned life-saving and swimming merit badges in Boy Scouts, I never really learned to swim until I was in college at 18 and was taught by a crusty old gentleman with strange ideas. I am forever grateful for his insistence that I swim right rather than exuberantly wrong.

Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
Hey Jude,
One must truly believe in fate in order to be an "old fatalist"......
Peace, light and love,
Amber


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