Excellent Jude
One wonders what ya been a smoking

Walt

So who forgot to put their slippers on, Kemosabe (derived from the Spanish, 'quien no sabe' or 'who knows')??!! LOL!! At times, they most certainly were covered by clouds and the vultures looking away. And as for that cheeky El Levante wind, well, as always, up to monkey business. Beautiful voicing in this one, Kartero. Another to add to the recital list. Clap, clap, tap, tap, tap, clap, move the cup... :) xx

Moving poetry, Jude ...

Smoke signals can often change lives.

Smoke signals are better than none. Well written Jude.

Amazing how less is more sometimes, nice one

I love the dramatic yet simple way in which this was written...pmedlin

I loved it. Well-done and certainly made me think.

as always, excellent, thought provoking work,

good one

Hey Jude
You know there was a lot of smoke here the other day, was that you?
Lol really there was.
Sometimes people get so caught up in their own stuff they just cannot see beyond it. Opening our hearts and souls by first loving and trusting in ourself is the first step in seeing what one truly desires and deserves. If it's meant to be it WILL!
Have a beautiful day!
Peace light and love
Amber

dreams, we want it. along the way, we lost it. sometimes,forgetting what it is.

Perhaps you have chosen to attempt your smoke signals in a very strong wind, mixing up the message to the point where it is incomprehensible? Is it a dream that is not whole and therefore lacks all the pieces that are necessary to complete the picture? Continue on, you are not experiencing failure, you simply need to keep trying until it all comes together. Interesting offering, Jude, the kind of situation that keep waking us up at night, frustrated, wondering if we can ever get it right.

My excuse is old age and hypothyroidism.
At least that's my story, and I'm stickin' with it.

Sometimes, our dreams just go up in smoke. Signaling nothing. But yours always catch fire. At least in the hearts of the ladies.

Ron

Seek, and yee shall find your dreams
Never cease dreaming...

Until you've found what I've found
My husband is my dream.

Sandie

"Curiouser and curiouser!"

Love ya!

Jane

Oooh, the dreams which cease to seek, causes so much turmoil within ourselves. Sometimes, if possible, it is better to back away from the dreams and maybe, with a clearer head, seek a different path.