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mortar matters
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~5~7~5~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Self-erected bridge
Dense ivy decorates age
Stable moss fills gaps
  

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 Reviews of "mortar matters"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 20, 2014
A fine haiku/senryu depending on one's interpretation. I love this form of Japanese poetry adapted to the English. Love and peace, Jude,

Regis

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on July 10, 2014
..."self-erected bridge" that draws upon the reservoir
of a priceless life-experience ...a force to be reckoned
with...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 7, 2014

lovely work, as always

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 7, 2014
Hey Jude
Sounds like life reflections A self erected bridge that connects two lifetimes with many journeys and life's ups and downs to create stable environments!
We all need a solid structure and some keen density to fill in life's cracks and gaps in order to recognize the end of that journey home !
Great poetry to make this reader think.
Much peace light and love
Amber

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 7, 2014
Nice haiku... M.True

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn
Reviewed on July 7, 2014
I love these kind of depictions, very lovely and nostalgic. Thanks, Jude! Grtz, D.T.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 7, 2014
A powerful picture in very few words.

Reviewed on July 6, 2014
To each his/her own path. Life does not come with a manual. Good are the ones that know how to build in his/her path.

Sandie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 6, 2014

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 6, 2014
an excellent Ku Jude
Enjoyed .....Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 6, 2014
Reminds me of the substantial ivy-covered brick farmhouse my grandparents owned. They also owned the farm across the road with a ramshackle wood farmhouse. Contrary to the "Three little piggies" fable, the ivy on the brick farmhouse destroyed the mortar, and if you drive by today, the only thing remaining is the renovated ramshackle wood farmhouse. My grandparents' solid brick home has been gone for over 30 years.

Ivy and moss can cover serious defects in the way things are held together, like fantasy trying to keep the psyche from going crazy and losing dogmatic organization.

Ron

Reviewed on July 6, 2014
I can picture this and it is lovely!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 5, 2014
This reminds me of spots I have seen when hiking or camping. Once I would get away from the well traveled trails and into the wilderness, I would see amazing things. Thanks for the flashbacks.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 5, 2014
Where's your permit sir
And your landscaping license
Moss can't hide the truth

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on July 5, 2014
it sounds lovely

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 5, 2014
Sounds like a footpath
And bare-footing it across
Hope the moss will hold


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