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dilemma of priorities
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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how dare he flag his emotion?

just to supplement
unwarranted chitchat
with variations of self-mockery?

how dare he reinforce
faint images of himself?

just to spew out sour
milky definitions
sweetened to disguise his true intentions

or send dream pages
to distant destinations
without a return address?

or to be absorbed in things he never knew
like how to accurately express
the perils and rewards of far-off negotiations

or try to establish new connections
to reconnect with those he knew before

how dare he shift priorities
without guiding his passion first to you?
      

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 Reviews of "dilemma of priorities"
Reviewed by kj Force
Reviewed on September 28, 2014
Your words are so spot on regarding society's priorities in life...whether political or at a personal level...nice job conveying your thoughts..

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 26, 2014
In so many ways this is the great social disconnect. Everyone wants to be seen but not necessarily as they truly are. Good write. M.True

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 17, 2014
How dare he?!!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on September 16, 2014
sounds like a whole lot of worry, well said.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 15, 2014
The perils of both writing and reviewing; do we write true to the primary expression of an inspiration and sentiment or temper what finds its way onto the page in the light of how it might be received - and by whom? Always the dilemma, Kartero - even more so when there's people in particular whose opinion we care about (and who have a chance to express it on forums like these). Being such a vociferous wind-bag, I live always with the trepidation of getting it wrong. To say anything other than nothing at all often takes great courage but I guess we just have to live with the consequences - sometimes rewarding, sometimes frustrating - always intriguing! And thus we continue to dare on... :) xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 15, 2014
Hey Jude,
I don't know how I missed this one...Wow...
Very oxymoronic to say the least...At first I thought it was political, but then the last line blows your mind.
Nicely done!
Peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 14, 2014
How dare he, indeed.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on September 13, 2014
Jude~
Expressive and accurate renderings of this gentleman.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 13, 2014

well done!!

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on September 13, 2014
Love the paradox that I'm seeing....

Duke

Reviewed on September 13, 2014
No doubt! I think I know this guy.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 12, 2014
I remember my dad saying to me quite a few times that I got to get my priorities str8 or in line or some such nonense...now that I got that out of the way & I realize it probably had nothing whatsoever to do with your poem, Bob, but I just had to say it because the title sparked it in my mind...now I forgot what I was going to say with regards your poem, but I liked it even though I can't remember...damn short term memory loss...maybe I will remember it the next time I re-read it, but of course by then I won't be able to comment on it again, oh well, have a good weekend either way...Peace, buddy, -e-

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 12, 2014
Beautiful poetry

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on September 12, 2014
I like this. You play cat-and-mouse with both your readers and the one to who$m the poem was addressed. A good picture of what's going on onside your heads.

Take care,

CHIP Bergeron

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on September 12, 2014
A very interesting write. I could see different meanings in this one wrtie. Very well done.
hug
Kathy

Reviewed on September 12, 2014
It feels perhaps someone is not big on sharing passion with anyone but the one . But the gist of this could be : how could you dare think I would.


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