clarity & composition (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 22, 2014

I like this very much, Jude. Thank you.

Reviewed on November 11, 2014

allowing secrets once remembered

to be augmented one more time

... et viola!:) Nicely remembered and recaptured in a crystallised fashion, composition and clarity fully achieved. Love those bending thought rays. A more sober version than the recital, I think! :) xx

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on November 7, 2014

Sounds as if reflection catches up to you in an obvious way. Neat flowing thoughts!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 7, 2014

Hey Jude,
I have not written a poem in two months, I was not feeling "clarity" to compose anything! However, this full moon woke me up, and now I get to read your lovely poetry. I also wrote a moon poem today...
Thanks for sharing your clarity and composition!
Peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on November 6, 2014

~Jude
Bending to the light. The clarity of expression resonates
in your smooth, gentle voice of penned verse. Beautiful read.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

Reviewed on November 6, 2014

"Shadows never perplex me more than I do"...what an attention grabber that was for me! I can relate. I love a poem that slides out of the mind onto a page as it wishes to, little doctored and exposing it's source as an honest and genuinely interested soul.

Be well,
Kathy

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on November 6, 2014

Like shadows words are hidden from view until they materialize is my impression of this write. I like the way you worded your write and the way you spaced it as if given time to think about it.

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on November 5, 2014

I don't seek meaning in your writing ... I'm impressed with the 'clarity of your composition. Well done, Jude

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on November 5, 2014

I like this....to me it talks about hoe inspiration can be fleeting and evanescent, until it all comes together and leves you wondering how you got there.

ChipB.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on November 5, 2014

Just let it flow the way you do. It's all good. You have written about what all poets come up to sometimes.................a roadblock. So? Go under, over, or around it. Sometimes I've been guilty of just going through it.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on November 5, 2014

. . . and round and round it goes . . . spinning mostly out of control . . . the idea is there merely waiting for the plucking . . .

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 5, 2014

Ed has a good point.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 5, 2014

Thoughts that invade then tickle the mind, most times don't make it to the page, in my case either, Jude. It is a game, in a way, do I own the thought or has it been specially delivered to me? I can allow it to roll around and as long as I do, I can manipulate and control it to suit my own wishes. Once I commit the words to the page, I must release them to live a life of their own and to become whatever the perception of their reader, is. Deep thoughts to be confounding me before 5 am, Jude. I enjoyed the read, thank you.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 4, 2014

...is not poetry just "secrets once remembered" at times, so let it come to the forefront of your mind, then down on paper, then if it looks good, write it out or if not, then not...is that not what we all do in some fashion or another...? -e-