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the old man in the woods (revisited)
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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there was an old man who lived in the woods
who had not been seen for many a year

the village elders would warn young and old
that this man was evil and slept with bears

even the preacher would sermon to his credulous flock
darkness and mayhem surrounded this man
to even look at him send one in shock

there was a young man whose mind was his own
and wondered about this solitary being
so he decided to venture into the valleys and over the stones
decided to take in a little sightseeing
and visit this dark throne

he still was unsure so a knife went under his belt
he gathered some water and placed it in a backpack
he waited until morning and then started his quest
up to the mountain where he hoped for the best

he saw a small cottage up on a hill
smoke rising into the sky
he approached so very cautiously
and took in a deep sigh
he called out “anybody home?”

the door slowly opened
and to his surprise
out came an old man with a glimmer in his eyes

he voice was gentle as he said “who’s there?”
so the young man responded “are there any bears?”
“not recently, they come and go
but I have seen their footprints all over the snow”

“I am from the village down past the river”

“oh,” said the old man
“would you like to come in for a while
and warm up your toes?
I’ll leave the door open
I’ve almost finished making a stew”

so the young man entered
the old man sitting on a chair
his abode was humble
obviously not a man of wealth
but books and manuscripts filled up numerous shelves

“do you like to read?” the old man inquired

“I do read but the library is small
not as many books as yours they could fill up the hall”

“well, take any one you desire and keep it as yours”

“but I don’t know what to pick, I’ve really no class”

“well take this one by Whitman,
it’s called ‘Leaves of Grass’”

and he handed it to him and told him it’s time to go
for he could feel in his bones an approaching snow

and the young man smiled and thanked him with for showing
that the truth all depended on which way the wind was blowing

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "the old man in the woods (revisited)"
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 23, 2014
how delightful, new style for you? enjoyed the storytelling and what a lovely gift your character has received and given Merry Christmas Jude.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 22, 2014
Love your story since I myself love wandering in the woods - and I've met some truly fascinating characters in them - both human and non-human.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on December 21, 2014
I logged in to tell you how much I loved this. I've been in the woods in solitude for last month and headed back out tomorrow, so timing is delightful. Wishes for a beautiful new year.

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2014
I loved this story, Jude! Often times people judge others by their appearance unaware of the beautiful giving heart that beats inside of them. Beautifully written, dear heart. Wishing you and your family a very Mele Kalikimaka from my shores to yours ...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 21, 2014

lovely


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 21, 2014
This is great, Bob, I like stories with a moral ending, especially those that speak of books for me to also read...thanks for a most compelling and amusing story...-e-

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on December 21, 2014
I enjoyed reading this story. Nicely done.

Michael D.

Reviewed on December 21, 2014
I admire this young man for not listening to gossip and finding out the truth for himself. Great lesson for all.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on December 21, 2014
~Jude~
Wonderful story for the young man determined to
know the truth about the old man in the cottage.
Coming away with more. Maybe to visit once again.
Enjoyed!!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 21, 2014
Yep, it is never wise to judge someone by the words of others because gossip flies. People repeat what they have heard, so many times, that often it is then seen as the truth. This man's only "crime" was his desire to live a solitary life yet he was seen as an evil person by the entire town. Hate is just another word for fear and in this case, the people feared him because they did not know him and he did not live as they did.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on December 21, 2014
Yeah, and ya gotta keep a sharp eye out for that "telling" wind, which the young man did when he secreted that blade under his belt. Enjoyed.


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