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who has the hold on truth? (reconsidered)
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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who has the hold on truth?

perhaps it’s a homeless man
wearing rainbow clown hair
quickly turning his baseball cap
from side to side
while holding the frame
of a broken umbrella
(minus its fabric)
over his head
uttering profanities
with a smile and a wink

perhaps it’s a child
who smiles
as a thunderstorm approaches
but doesn’t hesitate warning his mother
to seek shelter in the family van

perhaps it’s a poet
writing in the dark by a sole candle
not concerned if the world
will ever know his poems
for he knows a greater audience is reading

perhaps it’s an entourage of actors
inhabiting the theater of a planet
who boast the fortune of having a playwright
who patterns the stage and writes the screenplay
yet allows the actors to improvise much of the dialogue
ppontaneously unfurling the context of the grand finale

perhaps it’s those watching earth from a distance
cohabitating mountains and streams
and traversing sidewalks of modern cities
who come from unseen stars
where truth is abundantly clear
and is beginning to take root and grow
in the gardens of mankind’s illusions

who has the hold on truth?
the incredulous say “not me”

 

 


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 Reviews of "who has the hold on truth? (reconsidered)"
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 24, 2014
Cool write, Bob, and of course I have to love the third paragraph for it sounds so like me, except my "soul" IS the candle I write by...-e-

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on December 23, 2014
Nice write, and that's the truth.

Michael D.

Reviewed on December 23, 2014
Great write! You have given me much to think about today.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 23, 2014
Who has the hold on truth? Quite simply the author of Truth; I'm fully convinced. When you find Him, you can finally grasp the real thing with both hands in full-assurance that there is no other Truth. You've captured palpable vignette's here, Robert. Your last stanza sums it up well, IMO. When we fully understand who we really are... then no ones opinion can ever shake us.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 23, 2014
Powerfully Good, as your pen always is.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 23, 2014

as always, your words inspire, thought provoking read

m

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2014
I loved the imagery you've painted in this wonderfully written piece, Jude ... I think you know me well enough to know "who has the hold on truth" in my eyes ...

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on December 22, 2014
Truth of it is they made one for all of us Broadway 1942 called "By Jupiter." In the land of the Amazons the women rule and do battle while the men stay at home, mind the children, and buy new hats. An army of Greek soldiers, led by Theseus and Hercules, arrives in search of the Sacred Girdle of Diana, currently in the hands of reigning Queen Hippolyta.

Girdle is the operative word here. To have to improvise a girdle puts the squeeze on, who has the hold on the truth? Why the Madam, of course. This stanza resonates, I love it because it has a hold on the truth--->

"Perhaps it’s an entourage of actors
Inhabiting the theater of a planet
Who boast the fortune of having a playwright
Who patterns the stage and writes the screenplay
Yet allows the actors to improvise much of the dialogue
Spontaneously unfurling the context of the grand finale"

Polite curtsy,
Sage

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 22, 2014
The closest we can probably get to truth is speculation and a viable point of view...Truth is fickle. What we believe as truth in one century is long disproven in the next. Truth is what feels right in our heart and it is not necessary, or even advisable, to attempt to get someone else to agree with us. I really liked this, Jude. One of the unanswered questions of the ages.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on December 22, 2014
If truth be told...it tends to escape us all but in the eyes who see the light it is only plain to see. Excellent work.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on December 22, 2014
Awww . . . For every man's truth there is one in the waiting room with more truth, and another . . .


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